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Title: Forest floor
Post by: yossam on November 28, 2013, 03:41:30 PM
Something different......................
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Post by: zaxxon on November 28, 2013, 03:46:15 PM
Very nice! The leaf covered ground looks great.
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Post by: Lady of the Lake on November 29, 2013, 04:01:50 PM
Really like the ground.  Somehow the flower seems out of place, not sure why?
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Post by: yossam on November 29, 2013, 04:07:30 PM
Actually that was what I was going for.....................just about everything is dead, except the flower.  :)  Glad you liked the ground.
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Post by: Lady of the Lake on November 29, 2013, 04:35:18 PM
No, not that it was alive......just the size or something....not sure.
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Post by: yossam on November 29, 2013, 05:14:08 PM
Bigger or smaller...........I am assuming smaller.  :D
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Post by: Lady of the Lake on November 29, 2013, 06:52:15 PM












I would try smaller.....at least not so tall.









Title: Re: Forest floor
Post by: choronr on November 29, 2013, 09:05:34 PM
Comparing the flower size to the dead leaves size, I think the size of the crocus is OK. What you need here is some dramatic lighting with some fog. You might try an almost overhead sun ...maybe 75 to 80 degrees. Then, add a second sun with very low strength 180 degrees opposite the main sun with a low elevation ...maybe about 10 degrees. Play with the fog density.
Title: Re: Forest floor
Post by: Dune on November 30, 2013, 02:54:43 AM
I would leave out the trunk. And why not experiment with wet leaves.... add tiny droplets onto their surface (PF, world based) with a strong reflection.
Title: Re: Forest floor
Post by: yossam on November 30, 2013, 12:50:42 PM
Made some changes.......................
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Post by: AP on November 30, 2013, 01:20:10 PM
I would use some minor displacement on that trunk because the texture maps looks flat and painted on.
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Post by: choronr on November 30, 2013, 01:27:57 PM
This is much better. Agree the bark of the tree needs some bump.
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Post by: ra on November 30, 2013, 03:27:04 PM
Great, like that fog in this one also...
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Post by: masonspappy on November 30, 2013, 05:38:47 PM
yeah, that's the ticket...
:)
Title: Re: Forest floor
Post by: yossam on November 30, 2013, 06:16:59 PM
Made some more changes............
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Post by: choronr on November 30, 2013, 07:45:51 PM
Looks much better. One other thing I noticed; the exposed root on the left side looks like a hip, upper leg, knee and lower leg partially in the ground ...odd; like seeing figures in the clouds.
Title: Re: Forest floor
Post by: yossam on November 30, 2013, 08:01:12 PM
I was going to ask you to share what drugs you were taking......................but I see it too.  ???


Maybe Walli is putting subliminal geometry is his plants............... :)
Title: Re: Forest floor
Post by: masonspappy on December 01, 2013, 12:16:51 AM
Quote from: choronr on November 30, 2013, 07:45:51 PM
Looks much better. One other thing I noticed; the exposed root on the left side looks like a hip, upper leg, knee and lower leg partially in the ground ...odd; like seeing figures in the clouds.
Yeah, I see it too.
I wonder how much effort it would take to deliberately place subliminal elements in a render?   :)
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Post by: Dune on December 01, 2013, 02:44:34 AM
Now you're really getting somewhere; huge improvement!
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Post by: Walli on December 02, 2013, 02:56:38 AM
this is looking very nice! Beeing that close to the ground, I would try to scatter some leaves with real geomtry - that would add a lot of volume.
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Post by: pclavett on December 15, 2013, 09:38:30 AM
Love these images and mostly the most recent ones as the tree looks better and the forest floor is absolutely perfect !
Superb Work !
Paul