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General => Image Sharing => Topic started by: mindsap on March 15, 2014, 12:04:23 AM

Title: WIP
Post by: mindsap on March 15, 2014, 12:04:23 AM
No pun intended. :)  Well maybe a little... ;D
Title: Re: WIP
Post by: Kadri on March 15, 2014, 01:35:49 AM

The ground and clouds might use just a little more work , but as an idea i like it a lot :)
Title: Re: WIP
Post by: yossam on March 15, 2014, 01:42:42 AM
I like the concept........... :)


2nd Kadri.
Title: Re: WIP
Post by: choronr on March 15, 2014, 02:54:11 AM
An image that creates laughter ...need more of 'Dali' type images. Good work here!
Title: Re: WIP
Post by: kaedorg on March 15, 2014, 03:14:55 AM
Could still work on details but this image lets our imagination having a story after that,
so it's a good one.
Title: Re: WIP
Post by: mhall on March 15, 2014, 03:43:53 AM
I like this much more on second viewing. Great concept.

The first time I looked at it, I didn't realize that the dump truck was hauling the dirt and trees - to me it looked like they were in the background and the truck was driving in the foreground, though the scale of the details on the soil is clearly larger than that of the hills in the background. Perhaps working out a bit of shadows for the landscape in the background to help the truck and its contents stand out in the foreground? Or changing the soil color for the load in the truck so it looks more "freshly dug"? Or a small stream of dust/dirt cascading from the back or over the sides of the truck?

Also, the way the front of the truck is being clipped on the right side of the frame bugs me a bit.

But the concept is really fun.

~Micheal
Title: Re: WIP
Post by: Dune on March 15, 2014, 03:53:40 AM
Great idea!
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Post by: archonforest on March 15, 2014, 10:50:48 AM
great concept!