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General => Image Sharing => Topic started by: Kevin F on March 18, 2014, 07:22:49 AM

Title: The old paved path
Post by: Kevin F on March 18, 2014, 07:22:49 AM

Here's new one using a modified version of the Paved Path file kindly donated by J Meyer (thanks so much).
Trees from Xfrog and NWDA (by Walli) plants from NWDA (Walli), blue bells by TerrAde, sheep for Lynne's Creations, fence my own.
Comments good and bad welcome.

Title: Re: The old paved path
Post by: inkydigit on March 18, 2014, 02:37:58 PM
great idea and nicely done too!
:)
Title: Re: The old paved path
Post by: archonforest on March 18, 2014, 02:45:24 PM
nice pix! and great usage of the path ;)
Title: Re: The old paved path
Post by: Mahnmut on March 18, 2014, 04:50:38 PM
Nice one, reminds me of a place near my home (at least the halfburied path does.

Only thing that irritates me is the purple flowers, somehow they disturb my perception of the shape of the landscape. Seems to me as if the violet colour was below the green.

my best regards,
J
Title: Re: The old paved path
Post by: Hannes on March 18, 2014, 05:02:05 PM
Mahnmut was faster! That was exactly what I thought. This is an excellent picture but the violet plants look kind of out of place. I don't know, if they are too small or if there are too many of them. They definitely fit into the image, but something is wrong with them.
But anyway, this looks magnificent!
Title: Re: The old paved path
Post by: Kevin F on March 19, 2014, 06:23:28 AM
thanks for the comments guys. I think the problem with the Bluebells is that they're too homogenous with the nettles. They need to be more clumped in separate areas. The shading from the trees doesn't help either. I'll re-render with mods.
Title: Re: The old paved path
Post by: Kevin F on March 20, 2014, 03:52:25 PM
modified version:
Brighter (too much?)
Veg changes & sun angle shifted.
Title: Re: The old paved path
Post by: Dune on March 21, 2014, 03:38:06 AM
Much better. I would add more undergrowth to 'interact' with the bluebells, so they aren't like a carpet. And I would wet the road (not personally  ;)), at least in patches, near the puddle.
Title: Re: The old paved path
Post by: TheBadger on March 21, 2014, 03:25:24 PM
Its looking good!
Title: Re: The old paved path (final)
Post by: Kevin F on March 25, 2014, 04:54:40 AM
Latest and final version.
Title: Re: The old paved path
Post by: Walli on March 25, 2014, 05:33:13 AM
very nice and I especially like the path with puddles.
Title: Re: The old paved path
Post by: Dune on March 25, 2014, 09:15:47 AM
Great improvement, indeed!
Title: Re: The old paved path
Post by: choronr on March 25, 2014, 10:43:23 AM
Excellent scene Kevin. The rework improves realism.
Title: Re: The old paved path
Post by: Hannes on March 25, 2014, 11:46:12 AM
Incredibly realistic! Truly an improvement.
Title: Re: The old paved path
Post by: Kadri on March 25, 2014, 12:16:38 PM

The last one looks great Kevin!
Title: Re: The old paved path
Post by: j meyer on March 25, 2014, 12:20:25 PM
Nice one indeed.
Title: Re: The old paved path
Post by: Kevin F on March 25, 2014, 05:05:03 PM
Thanks for all your comments and suggestions folks. I think j meyers paved path makes it though, thanks again Jochen.
Title: Re: The old paved path (final final!)
Post by: Kevin F on March 27, 2014, 12:01:20 PM
I know I said the last one was the final one, but I couldn't resist slipping  j meyer's land rover and dandelO's wooden gate into the scene. Thanks guys for these great models.
Just a quick (35min render at low res) version .
Title: Re: The old paved path
Post by: choronr on March 27, 2014, 12:04:19 PM
Looking very good Kevin.
Title: Re: The old paved path
Post by: TheBadger on March 27, 2014, 07:57:01 PM
lol I like it! This one made me laugh. Its just a happy felling image  :)