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Title: Summer Dusk final
Post by: choronr on August 02, 2014, 12:48:17 PM
This final is the result of experimenting with placing a large mossy rock in the foreground of the river; a fish jumping out of the water - both surrounded by a vortex shader. Neither of those two tests yielded a  pleasing point of interest. I proceeded to pursue a makeover.

Ulco offered a very nice grouping of rocks in rough waters file to try. I placed this additional population of fake stones in the chain hoping it would make an improvement; but, the river looked too busy, especially since either side is heavily populated with vegetation.

I decided to revert to the original river and adjust the two additional suns and enviro-light settings by reducing their strengths. This made a much better scene since now the vegetation appears less saturated; and overall, better contrasts.

Clip files used for the shoreline fake stones are from dandelO; and, vegetation models are by Walli.
Title: Re: Summer Dusk final
Post by: archonforest on August 02, 2014, 12:56:11 PM
Great render. Love the atmo and the colors ;)
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Post by: fleetwood on August 02, 2014, 01:07:10 PM
Fine improvements I'd say.
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Post by: mhaze on August 02, 2014, 01:26:41 PM
Excellent result, the lighting is great. sometimes you can add too much too a scene, a bad habit of mine.
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Post by: choronr on August 02, 2014, 01:47:02 PM
Thank you all. I'll be adding a shared .tgd later today.
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Post by: bobbystahr on August 02, 2014, 01:54:04 PM
Well that turned out very nice...I have a hard time with sun rises/sets....
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Post by: Oshyan on August 02, 2014, 04:20:33 PM
I think you have indeed found the balance Bob. Well done. :)

- Oshyan
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Post by: choronr on August 02, 2014, 04:40:44 PM
Thank you Bobby and Oshyan.
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Post by: DannyG on August 02, 2014, 06:09:16 PM
Excellent
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Post by: choronr on August 02, 2014, 06:15:54 PM
Thanks Danny. The .tgd and .ter files are in File Sharing.
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Post by: zaxxon on August 02, 2014, 06:23:07 PM
An excellent image, lovely depth and palette.
Title: Re: Summer Dusk final
Post by: choronr on August 02, 2014, 06:26:06 PM
Quote from: zaxxon on August 02, 2014, 06:23:07 PM
An excellent image, lovely depth and palette.
Thank you for your visit and comment.
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Post by: kalwalt on August 02, 2014, 07:13:08 PM
Very nice picture! you did a nice improvement compared to the first version, thank's a lot for the shared .tgd, it's an exellent resource! :)
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Post by: Lady of the Lake on August 02, 2014, 07:25:08 PM
Really pretty sunset.
Title: Re: Summer Dusk final
Post by: choronr on August 02, 2014, 08:58:06 PM
Quote from: kalwalt on August 02, 2014, 07:13:08 PM
Very nice picture! you did a nice improvement compared to the first version, thank's a lot for the shared .tgd, it's an exellent resource! :)
Thank you; much appreciated. And, you are welcome. Hope you can come up with some new scenes.
Title: Re: Summer Dusk final
Post by: choronr on August 02, 2014, 08:59:34 PM
Quote from: Lady of the Lake on August 02, 2014, 07:25:08 PM
Really pretty sunset.
Thank you Lyla, I'm glad to have finished this one. On to another project.
Title: Re: Summer Dusk final
Post by: Dune on August 03, 2014, 02:20:15 AM
It's turned into a nice final, Bob. Very subtle. Too bad the stones+foam setup didn't work out, but at least you know how to do that, for another venture.
Title: Re: Summer Dusk final
Post by: choronr on August 03, 2014, 02:34:46 AM
Quote from: Dune on August 03, 2014, 02:20:15 AM
It's turned into a nice final, Bob. Very subtle. Too bad the stones+foam setup didn't work out, but at least you know how to do that, for another venture.
Thank you Ulco. Sun sets (or rises) can be tricky in how it affects all of the elements of a scene, especially when water is included and the low sun. I really like your stones/foam setup and will be using it in the near future. Thank you again for all your help.
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Post by: Dune on August 03, 2014, 02:35:54 AM
You're welcome.