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Title: Iceland Fall
Post by: Dune on September 13, 2014, 02:22:35 AM
I found a photo, which I wanted to replicate (though I can't find it now). Didn't turn out exactly the same, but I like some aspects of this render. Others I don't.
Title: Re: Iceland Fall
Post by: Hannes on September 13, 2014, 03:20:05 AM
Great image, Ulco!
Some minor crits: the plants in the shade look a bit flat. Is the translucency too high? Or the ambient occlusion too low? And the bushes in the upper part are very green. Maybe a little more color variation and slightly less saturation?
Otherwise fantastic!
Title: Re: Iceland Fall
Post by: Kadri on September 13, 2014, 03:28:02 AM

Very nice indeed.
Looks like you are 90% there already Ulco.
Title: Re: Iceland Fall
Post by: Kadri on September 13, 2014, 10:39:02 PM

I suppose it is this one Ulco?
http://www.amazingplacesonearth.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/10/Seljalandsfoss-a-birds-eye-view.jpg
Title: Re: Iceland Fall
Post by: Dune on September 14, 2014, 02:27:01 AM
Good work, Sherlock! Indeed, that's the one. Thanks, I lost it between all my files.
Title: Re: Iceland Fall
Post by: choronr on September 14, 2014, 02:31:40 AM
I like this point of view for a waterfall showing its effect in creating rivers. Very good Ulco. Agree about the greens of the smaller bushes ...maybe more of an olive green?
Title: Re: Iceland Fall
Post by: Kadri on September 14, 2014, 02:32:30 AM
Quote from: Dune on September 14, 2014, 02:27:01 AM
Good work, Sherlock! Indeed, that's the one. Thanks, I lost it between all my files.

:)
Title: Re: Iceland Fall
Post by: Dune on September 14, 2014, 02:33:42 AM
I'll probably work this out better later, with a more proper river, and better 'greens'.
Title: Re: Iceland Fall
Post by: choronr on September 14, 2014, 02:42:23 AM
One other thing, is this a DEM terrain file; or, a procedural one you created? It's an ideal set up for a waterfall.
Title: Re: Iceland Fall
Post by: Dune on September 14, 2014, 03:03:47 AM
It's a warped simple shape, a redirect, and some more masked displacements, and a painted shader river and riverbed, and fall stones pop area, once the terrain was ok. Stones pop sitting on the terrain before the cliff was displaced.
Title: Re: Iceland Fall
Post by: Mahnmut on September 14, 2014, 04:31:52 AM
Great foto, great start on the replication.
Because of the high standards we are used from you I add some crits I wouldn´t have mentioned to a mere mortal:
The cliff looks way smoother in your version and is the part that still says cgi in my opinion. The river below the waterfall could have some attention (althogh I couldn´t make it better, I suspect you can)
Concerning the green: Your dark green bushes simply are not there in the original, but I like them. The light green is even more saturated in the original. As far as I can tell from Fotos, greens are often unbelievably intense in contrast to the volcanic vastness of iceland.
Cheers,
J
Title: Re: Iceland Fall
Post by: Dune on September 14, 2014, 09:25:01 AM
Thanks Jan. I got carried away with the plants, but in fact I should exactly try to replicate, including the rock face, which I admit is not very good. It all can be better, of course.
Title: Re: Iceland Fall
Post by: Oshyan on September 15, 2014, 01:32:01 AM
Oh hey, I've been there. :D

- Oshyan
Title: Re: Iceland Fall
Post by: Dune on September 15, 2014, 02:27:38 AM
Yeah, where's your photo's?
Title: Re: Iceland Fall
Post by: TheBadger on September 15, 2014, 02:36:21 AM
^^ YEAH!
Photo or it didn't happen  ;D
We have been very patient I would say.  ;) :D
Title: Re: Iceland Fall
Post by: Oshyan on September 15, 2014, 02:57:12 AM
Part 1 of probably 3: https://plus.google.com/photos/+OshyanGreene/albums/6049808465110984305 (https://plus.google.com/photos/+OshyanGreene/albums/6049808465110984305)
All the ones at the end...

Part 2 soon...

- Oshyan
Title: Re: Iceland Fall
Post by: archonforest on September 15, 2014, 03:49:59 AM
WOW! Great photos Oshyan ;)
I enjoyed the journey with the pix a lot! Thx for sharing.
Title: Re: Iceland Fall
Post by: Oshyan on September 15, 2014, 05:38:04 PM
My pleasure. Maybe I'll post a separate discussion thread in Open Discussion when all 3 parts are done. :D

- Oshyan
Title: Re: Iceland Fall
Post by: Dune on September 19, 2014, 10:45:05 AM
Thanks Oshyan, some very nice images indeed! I particularly liked some B&W images.
Title: Re: Iceland Fall
Post by: TheBadger on September 19, 2014, 12:26:29 PM
  :)
Title: Re: Iceland Fall
Post by: Dune on September 21, 2014, 12:24:45 PM
Different setup with a SSS river, and paths. The river needs some adjustment, for one. And it's not Iceland any longer  ;)
Title: Re: Iceland Fall
Post by: choronr on September 21, 2014, 01:52:16 PM
Wow, the details are phenomenal. I especially like the rock face of the cliffs; and, the minute details of the base surface. Collectively, this entire picture is beautiful.
Title: Re: Iceland Fall
Post by: DannyG on September 21, 2014, 04:03:55 PM
Looking very nice Ulco
Title: Re: Iceland Fall
Post by: otakar on September 21, 2014, 10:11:10 PM
What a cool render! Still too clean, but the terrain and surfacing are superb. The waterfall needs more water/mist at the place of impact. Would love to have a flythrough of this one.
Title: Re: Iceland Fall
Post by: choronr on September 21, 2014, 11:16:52 PM
This should go up on NWDA as a preset.
Title: Re: Iceland Fall
Post by: Dune on September 23, 2014, 03:13:53 AM
I'd have to clean it up considerably then.

Here's a low POV, added some grasses.
Title: Re: Iceland Fall
Post by: Kadri on September 23, 2014, 03:51:50 AM

I like the last one more. Nice :)
Title: Re: Iceland Fall
Post by: Dune on September 23, 2014, 09:37:55 AM
Thanks Kadri. Forgot this one.
Title: Re: Iceland Fall
Post by: archonforest on September 23, 2014, 09:49:27 AM
I like this one ;)