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General => Image Sharing => Topic started by: ozijon on July 26, 2007, 12:42:35 PM

Title: The lodge
Post by: ozijon on July 26, 2007, 12:42:35 PM
The lodge
Title: Re: The lodge
Post by: Mavcat on July 26, 2007, 12:48:09 PM
Looks very nice :) Some comments : I think your foreground terrain and the terrain where your building stands is a bit too smooth. The white color of the mountains is ment to be snow? Doesnt look like snow to me,try making it more white :) The rest is nice
Title: Re: The lodge
Post by: rcallicotte on July 26, 2007, 01:21:54 PM
I'll go along with mavcat, except to say that the snow needs to be patchier.  It looks like it's painted on.  You might need a fractal or two in there. 

My first impression is how grand it is and how beautiful the sweep of it is.  The first thing after that I noticed is that the block to the right of the lodge looks like a block and not a land mass.  It needs erosion or some fractals.

Nice job.
Title: Re: The lodge
Post by: Volker Harun on July 26, 2007, 03:35:01 PM
I would like to add, that the trees in front have some very good shading!
Title: Re: The lodge
Post by: old_blaggard on July 26, 2007, 06:50:50 PM
I agree that the trees do look nice.  There are two things that both me a little here - firstly, the scale seems to be a bit odd for those mountains - I can't quite put my finger on it, but it just seems like they need a little more depth to put them in perspective.  Secondly, I'm seeing some really right angles and straight lines on the terrain, which detracts a little from the realism for me.
Title: Re: The lodge
Post by: rcallicotte on July 27, 2007, 10:45:13 AM
Interesting, o_b.  After reading your post, I see the same things.  Good eye.  Right angles and straight lines is the best way to explain what I said above.