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Title: River again
Post by: Dune on March 30, 2015, 02:23:04 AM
My Sunday morning challenge (reduced).
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Post by: choronr on March 30, 2015, 02:51:20 AM
Each of these images are very good. The second is one that I favor since it had me looking at it for quite awhile ...great mood here.
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Post by: Upon Infinity on March 30, 2015, 05:00:44 AM
The first image is great!  The only thing I don't care for is the wood textures on the boat seem like they don't line up.
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Post by: Dune on March 30, 2015, 05:23:52 AM
I noticed that too, but they don't need to line up really, as the stern is made of different planks. But it is always a challenge to have plank UV's curve with the curve of the boat.
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Post by: Oshyan on March 30, 2015, 04:00:32 PM
Really interesting and cool swirls you have in the water!

- Oshyan
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Post by: Henry Blewer on March 30, 2015, 05:58:59 PM
Inspiring work as always. I like the broad daylight version better. The swirls are a great touch.
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Post by: Dune on March 31, 2015, 03:13:30 AM
Thanks. Smallscale warping of the water shader wave fractals.
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Post by: mhaze on March 31, 2015, 04:33:49 AM
Those swirls really make the the image realistic.
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Post by: Hannes on March 31, 2015, 08:56:27 AM
These are incredibly realistic, Ulco!! The swirls are the icing on the cake. I'd like to see some (more) translucency on the sails in the second image.
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Post by: DannyG on March 31, 2015, 10:00:22 AM
Excellent Ulco
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Post by: TheBadger on March 31, 2015, 10:37:37 AM
Wow man!
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Post by: otakar on March 31, 2015, 11:25:33 AM
Exquisite
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Post by: Dune on March 31, 2015, 12:26:40 PM
You were right about the translucency. I fiddled with it for the first render, thought the crop was ok, but I think this is better.
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Post by: choronr on March 31, 2015, 01:05:31 PM
Great improvement on those sails!
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Post by: fleetwood on March 31, 2015, 01:06:13 PM
Very nice on all. Like the night scenes water.
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Post by: fleetwood on March 31, 2015, 01:22:47 PM
Personal opinion - the sail could go back just a notch. The first version draws me to the horizon. The second one draws me back to the sail.
Don't know about the qualities of Roman canvas but it might be more stained. I was looking at photos of dhow boats it looks like the poorer the owners the more stained and patched the sail is.
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Post by: Dune on April 01, 2015, 02:53:18 AM
You make the point I was having in the back of my head. Thanks.
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Post by: DocCharly65 on April 01, 2015, 07:41:24 AM
I think al af them have a individual charme.

Is the boat modelled by yourself?
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Post by: Kadri on April 01, 2015, 08:19:02 AM

I like all of them.
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Post by: Dune on April 01, 2015, 08:57:35 AM
Thanks guys. Yes, the boat is mine.
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Post by: fleetwood on April 01, 2015, 09:42:10 AM
Spot on improvements and balance, to my eye.
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Post by: dorianvan on April 02, 2015, 12:22:43 AM
My honest opinion is that the first one is by far the best. Both the action with the birds and the great colors really capture the scene; the sun's position is perfect to show off the water. My only critique would be that the closest person looks a tad bit 3d, as well as the boat (just a little). If they were farther away from the camera, I believe it would be unnoticeable. Really awesome work though.
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Post by: Dune on April 02, 2015, 02:11:34 AM
Thanks, Dorian.
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Post by: Oshyan on April 02, 2015, 08:32:07 PM
Agreed, I do prefer the daylight view (though I'm normally a huge sunset fan). Aside from that one guy looking a bit too CG, it's great. Just need better human models, the old lament really.

- Oshyan
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Post by: Dune on April 03, 2015, 02:41:13 AM
I might get back to that one and do it bigger, as I just made some more postures for the floating gulls (made and textured in LW, taken through Poseray, enlarged 10x, taken into Mudbox, posed differently, exported as obj, taken through Poseray again, reduced 1/10x ... it works, the gull keeps its UV's in place)
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Post by: bobbystahr on April 13, 2015, 11:02:57 AM
Quote from: Dune on April 03, 2015, 02:41:13 AM
I might get back to that one and do it bigger, as I just made some more postures for the floating gulls (made and textured in LW, taken through Poseray, enlarged 10x, taken into Mudbox, posed differently, exported as obj, taken through Poseray again, reduced 1/10x ... it works, the gull keeps its UV's in place)

The U/V gods are on yer side with all that manipulation...I like the stained sails and a big fan of the night view myself.
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Post by: dorianvan on May 04, 2015, 02:56:08 PM
Hi Ulco, this is such an awesome image that I had to bring it up the list again. Do you have water transparency turned off for the day shot? I'm trying to render one of Avaris Island at 14400x10800, and only a small fraction of it renders in 24 hours. Thanks.
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Post by: Dune on May 05, 2015, 02:15:02 AM
Wow, Avaris at 14400x10800! Huge. Billboard?
Water takes a lot of time indeed, I wish it could be speeded up. I had a reflective shader with soft reflection (slow also) as a basis, and only for the front part (about halfway to the boat) added a water shader with some transparency and 10% murky water. But that water took long as well, so I didn't dare to render it bigger.
But especially rough water, transparency and soft reflections takes ages. Didn't I at the time add a distance mask for frontal only transparency?