Making a new illustration, lots more to add to the scene, just thought I would share the creation process:-)
Nice start.............pulls up a chair. ;D One thing your water is too rough.............I would take it down about half of what it is now. ;)
Yup I agree, don't like the water color either, now that I look, I really don't like the composition overall LOL!!!
Well in that situation I blow it up and start over again, Hee hee hee....check out some water stuff in file sharing...some quite inspirational stuff there, particularily this one from MrLamppost
http://www.planetside.co.uk/forums/index.php/topic,4459.15.html