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Title: The Birds Final?
Post by: mhaze on May 08, 2015, 10:33:37 AM
Terrain created in world machine, heather is from Dune and the crows are from Daz.  Tree and greass clumps were made in Speedtree. The rest Terragen. 
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Post by: bla bla 2 on May 08, 2015, 10:52:09 AM
I like the cloud.
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Post by: kaedorg on May 08, 2015, 12:00:55 PM
nice one here. IMO the tree makes difficult to see the birds. It took a time to understand what is tree what is birds.
Could be better to separate them
Otherwise, i like the colors, clouds. A great one

David
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Post by: mhaze on May 08, 2015, 12:21:08 PM
Aaah! I see what you mean.  I'll play with that.
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Post by: Oshyan on May 08, 2015, 03:24:50 PM
Agree with kaedorg, but otherwise looks quite nice. Dramatic sky, great lighting, especially on the left.

- Oshyan
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Post by: Mahnmut on May 08, 2015, 04:23:27 PM
Also very nice vegetation.
The ambiguity between tree and birds could be interesting, as it is now it´s rather atriple ambiguity tree-background-birds, that makes it confusing on first view.
Otherwise great!

J
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Post by: choronr on May 08, 2015, 06:53:11 PM
Looks very good; maybe just an adjustment to the point of view.
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Post by: Dune on May 09, 2015, 02:29:09 AM
It has an eerie, dramatic feel to it, like some sort of interaction between tree and birds, enhanced by the ominous sky. But I agree about the 'invisibility' of the tree. A solution would be to add some (local) mist behind the tree, so it stands out a little more. If you further increase patchyness of the water, it may have an interesting effect, like local winds roughing up the water.
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Post by: mhaze on May 09, 2015, 04:29:40 AM
Cheers all, some more work on this seems in order.
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Post by: mhaze on May 10, 2015, 10:42:46 AM
I've added some of your suggestions,  I think it is a definite improvement!
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Post by: choronr on May 10, 2015, 10:59:53 AM
Looking really good Mick!
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Post by: mhaze on May 10, 2015, 11:26:10 AM
Thankyou.
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Post by: fleetwood on May 10, 2015, 12:04:23 PM
Nice job. To my eye, you kept the mood and removed any confusion.
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Post by: mhaze on May 10, 2015, 12:35:39 PM
Cheers :)
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Post by: DocCharly65 on May 10, 2015, 01:39:32 PM
In my eyes it's very good now!
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Post by: mhaze on May 10, 2015, 02:15:22 PM
Thanks.
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Post by: Emmeline on May 10, 2015, 09:08:34 PM
Very nice! To be honest, the first moment I saw this, I thought 'You can't just walk into Mordor! You can however, fly there.' :D
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Post by: TheBadger on May 10, 2015, 09:11:10 PM
Mystical! I like it.
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Post by: Dune on May 11, 2015, 02:36:14 AM
Love it, great improvement!
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Post by: mhaze on May 11, 2015, 04:27:05 AM
Thank you all and thanks for the suggestions.
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Post by: bobbystahr on May 11, 2015, 10:58:02 AM
Really captures a mood, very well done...*****
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Post by: archonforest on May 11, 2015, 11:49:46 AM
Really nice!!
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Post by: mhaze on May 11, 2015, 02:29:28 PM
Thank you.
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Post by: DannyG on May 11, 2015, 06:34:18 PM
Great moody image
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Post by: inkydigit on May 11, 2015, 07:01:15 PM
Great mood, great render full stop!
Excellent
:)
J