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General => Image Sharing => Topic started by: Preacherman on June 01, 2015, 06:54:15 AM

Title: Sunrise
Post by: Preacherman on June 01, 2015, 06:54:15 AM
trying for a good sunrise.

comments welcome :-)
Title: Re: Sunrise
Post by: N-drju on June 01, 2015, 07:00:45 AM
Reminds me of one of my own renders. ;) Nice sky and grass. You could add some more small-scaled ripples on the water to break the sun reflection into tiny glowing bits.
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Or it could be that my at-work computer has shitty resolution. ;D
Title: Re: Sunrise
Post by: Preacherman on June 01, 2015, 12:22:05 PM
thx, i'll try that :)
Title: Re: Sunrise
Post by: archonforest on June 01, 2015, 01:28:04 PM
I like it....
...but somehow I have a feeling it is not done. I feel a bit empty the picture. I would
try to play with the close by trees...I think one is cool to stay close to the camera but maybe the other
one(or more) can go further down on the hill.
Title: Re: Sunrise
Post by: N-drju on June 02, 2015, 07:22:43 AM
The trees can be added to the 'rightish' hill, the one just before the lake/sea but I would definitely leave the front empty as it is with grass only and those two conifers. This gives a nice feeling of free space.
Title: Re: Sunrise
Post by: Mahnmut on June 02, 2015, 08:17:51 AM
Nice image, but i think the sun is to high up for that much colour and dark foreground (on the other hand, the foreground would appear dark when your eyes adapt to looking into the sun).

Best Regards,
J
Title: Re: Sunrise
Post by: Preacherman on June 04, 2015, 07:51:06 AM
thx for the comments :-)