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General => Image Sharing => Topic started by: rcallicotte on August 22, 2007, 08:30:16 AM

Title: Palm
Post by: rcallicotte on August 22, 2007, 08:30:16 AM
Comments are welcome.
Title: Re: Palm
Post by: Saurav on August 22, 2007, 09:27:00 AM
I really like this render as it's quite realistic. The clouds look like the Mammatus types usually associated with beginning of an intense storm. The composition and atmosphere settings are also spot on in terms of realism. I would re-render this at higher settings as there seems to be a lot of noise in the clouds/atmo. If you can get those patterns in the clouds to be a little larger and dip a little more to the ground (displace) that would add more to the realism. Check some Mammatus clouds pictures in google. I would also light up the tree a bit so you can see some details on it. Other than that this is looking really good. Congrats for a fine image.
Title: Re: Palm
Post by: nvseal on August 22, 2007, 09:55:15 AM
This looks very very good. Nice work on those clouds.
Title: Re: Palm
Post by: old_blaggard on August 22, 2007, 10:13:28 AM
I agree with both of those.  The idea and composition of the image is excellent, and the clouds themselves could benefit from a bit more quality, but I wouldn't tweak their settings at all.  Your best so far, I think.
Title: Re: Palm
Post by: rcallicotte on August 22, 2007, 10:44:49 AM
@Saurav - Thanks.  I've been tweaking, while logging my original values on a piece of paper.   ;D  This is fun.

@nvseal - Great.  Thanks for the compliment.

@o_b - Wow.  Cool compliments.  I'm trying other things, but I'm not losing my original values. 

I need to give credit to Paint.net for it's Level Adjustment that brought out the best in my saved TIF file from TG2.  I think I might like Paint.Net's Level adjustment better than Photoshop's (don't own CS3, though).
Title: Re: Palm
Post by: RArcher on August 22, 2007, 11:39:15 AM
I love the clouds and the overall sense of moodiness. For me, the palm tree is upsetting the balance of your image a bit.
Title: Re: Palm
Post by: Oshyan on August 22, 2007, 01:33:42 PM
Wow, didn't think I'd see a passable mammatus immitation for a while yet, but you've just about managed it! Nice work. :)

- Oshyan
Title: Re: Palm
Post by: Seth on August 22, 2007, 02:55:35 PM
very very nice clouds !
i love it !
Title: Re: Palm
Post by: sjefen on August 22, 2007, 04:36:07 PM
I agree with everyone. The clouds are very cool.
I would love to se this with better quality.
Title: Re: Palm
Post by: Volker Harun on August 23, 2007, 05:25:51 AM
Agree - but do not change the lighting.
Title: Re: Palm
Post by: FrankB on August 23, 2007, 06:37:53 AM
Well done, Calico!
Title: Re: Palm
Post by: Ogre on August 23, 2007, 11:16:34 AM
Love the image, especially the clouds.
Title: Re: Palm
Post by: rcallicotte on August 27, 2007, 09:39:06 AM
Here's an update with higher quality.  Interested in your comments.
Title: Re: Palm
Post by: old_blaggard on August 27, 2007, 10:04:07 AM
Great!  This brings out the shapes of the clouds even more.
Title: Re: Palm
Post by: bigben on August 27, 2007, 11:48:32 PM
Great image.  The photographer in me is itching to see just a touch of shadow detail in the foreground and maybe some more light coming through the gaps in the clouds (the sky is very dark)... although I don't know if that would change things too much.
Title: Re: Palm
Post by: mr-miley on August 28, 2007, 04:27:21 AM
Amazing clouds calico. This is one claustrophobic pic, it realy feels like the clouds are pressing down on the top of your head. Excelent work, unlike my spelling :)
Title: Re: Palm
Post by: rcallicotte on August 28, 2007, 10:25:58 AM
LOL.  Funny I was thinking the same thing when I was getting ready to post it.  I played with the idea of a clearer shadow in the foreground, where details could be seen, and changed my mind.  The lighting is like it is where the breaks are, since the sun is in a different area of the sky.  But, that was an option.  I could have moved the sun and exploited the rays.  Maybe I'm not finished yet...

Thanks!

Quote from: bigben on August 27, 2007, 11:48:32 PM
Great image.  The photographer in me is itching to see just a touch of shadow detail in the foreground and maybe some more light coming through the gaps in the clouds (the sky is very dark)... although I don't know if that would change things too much.


@everyone - Thanks for your input.  This has made creating this a worthwhile experience.