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Title: Temperate Desert Steppe
Post by: AP on September 25, 2016, 05:00:16 AM
Somewhere along the semi-arid flood plains.
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Post by: archonforest on September 25, 2016, 05:30:32 AM
Nice!
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Post by: Antoine on September 25, 2016, 07:23:46 AM
Very nice rock shader !
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Post by: DannyG on September 25, 2016, 08:25:58 AM
Very nice, the background rock textures are spot on
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Post by: luvsmuzik on September 25, 2016, 09:00:56 AM
Fantastic use of resources! Great contrast of sand and rock mid-level there!
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Post by: Kadri on September 25, 2016, 09:15:01 AM

Nice.
Not sure if you need that rock on the left bottom.
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Post by: Oshyan on September 25, 2016, 02:15:49 PM
Very nice. I like the variation in land forms and textures from foreground to background. I agree that the foreground rock on the left isn't adding much, but if it were a more interesting rock it could be good...

- Oshyan
Title: Re: Temperate Desert Steppe
Post by: AP on September 25, 2016, 05:18:02 PM
Thank you everyone. Yes, the idea was to have a variance of land forms all in the same area. All procedurally eroded and using all custom made vegetation. One reoccurring issue is having to use AO rather then GI as the yellow green tint would appear using the GI. I switched back and forth several times and the same effect occurred.
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Post by: Dune on September 26, 2016, 02:25:20 AM
Background is very good, I agree. The contrast between types of ground is really nice. But the foreground is too simplistic, IMO. If you can work that out you have a very good render. Just plain sand would even be better than what you have now, perhaps with some dried dead branches or spots of bleached grass to break it subtly.
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Post by: AP on September 26, 2016, 03:47:28 AM
What I could do is fill in the foreground more with the existing grass. I could also add in some more tall and dry/bleached grass. Perhaps two to three grasses added? I wanted to limit the sand to the washout channels and sediment deposits.
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Post by: mhaze on September 26, 2016, 04:19:49 AM
Background is very good. The difference between types of ground is very good but, I too, dislike the rock and feel there needs to be some foreground focus or narrative.
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Post by: bobbystahr on September 26, 2016, 01:00:58 PM
great image and I'll reserve comment till I can do better....
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Post by: DocCharly65 on September 27, 2016, 02:53:52 AM
Great render so far.

A little C from me (only things I could do, too  -   to relate on bobbies comment  ;)  )
In the foreground either delete the big boulder or make it more interesting with a lizzard and some DOF
In the backgound I personally would raise the snowy part some (100?) meters and make the bottom a bit more fuzzy.

But in general a great picture!
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Post by: AP on September 27, 2016, 06:49:02 PM
There are a couple of yellow green tinted areas of error but overall, I am done for the time being.
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Post by: masonspappy on September 27, 2016, 08:29:48 PM
definitely prefer the 2nd image
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Post by: Dune on September 28, 2016, 03:11:03 AM
Very good result.
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Post by: AP on September 28, 2016, 03:27:33 AM
Thank you and making these alterations was a good idea in the end.
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Post by: mhaze on September 28, 2016, 05:08:34 AM
Much better :)
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Post by: bobbystahr on September 28, 2016, 12:38:54 PM
wow, that a beauty man, the last on is stunning...those rock outcrops , if you'll excuse the expression, rock.