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General => Image Sharing => Topic started by: ozijon on November 16, 2007, 03:08:34 AM

Title: 2 new ones
Post by: ozijon on November 16, 2007, 03:08:34 AM
hi here are 2 new renders
the first one seems to be a bit Serrated thow not sure
why maybe the sun was to bright oh well
oh and the banner took over 30 hours to render ::)
and its the smallest render i ever made                           
                     Thanks john

   http://www.electroartshop.com/new_pics_p.html (http://www.electroartshop.com/new_pics_p.html)
Title: Re: 2 new ones
Post by: old_blaggard on November 16, 2007, 03:29:04 AM
Great use of models.  The composition of the first scene is quite nice, although there are some geometry issues with it.
Title: Re: 2 new ones
Post by: ozijon on November 16, 2007, 03:35:33 AM
yer not to sure what happend but it looks better in the normal render and seems better if
its made bigger but anyway live and lern  :D
Title: Re: 2 new ones
Post by: Kevin F on November 16, 2007, 08:45:27 AM
Sorry, but neither work for me. They're technically excellent, but in the first the woman looks like a plastic dummy and the lion just don't look real, it looks like it's just come back from the taxidermist. The purple lighting is too twee and fake. Still that's just my opinion.

As for the second - this is much better (just how did you achieve the deep snow effect everywhere it's superb). having said that, the whole thing looks too cartoony. I can just imagine the seven dwarfs coming out of the house. Maybe that's what you wanted in which case it works - well done. I really would like to know about the snow though, best I've seen.
Hope this is not too negative.
Kevin.
Title: Re: 2 new ones
Post by: ozijon on November 16, 2007, 10:03:48 AM
yes the first was just a exp to see how it would look and
the second is ment to be fantasy for xmas ;D  the snow is all from Models
thanks for your coments
         
Title: Re: 2 new ones
Post by: dhavalmistry on November 17, 2007, 01:46:29 PM
2nd one is great!