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Title: Le Survivant *UPDATE*
Post by: Seth on November 18, 2007, 11:17:38 AM
i try something different (for me) but i suffer from a lack of inspiration...
any ideas ?  ???
i thik i will keep the atmo and i don't want vegetation... but if you have a good idea... i'll listen to it ^^


(http://i23.servimg.com/u/f23/10/05/42/42/le_sur10.jpg)
Title: Re: Le Survivant
Post by: Tangled-Universe on November 18, 2007, 11:31:10 AM
I think this is very good image and pleasant to look at :)
Atmosphere and clouds look very nice, though maybe a tad too yellow(ish).
The rocks and model look good, they work fine in this image, good choice.
Maybe you could also move the tree a little bit more to the right, for the sake of composition.
For the rest I'd keep it this way :)

Martin
Title: Re: Le Survivant
Post by: dhavalmistry on November 18, 2007, 09:02:35 PM
very nice...I like the lighting in this image...and I agree about the composition parts...the tree is blocking the background mountains....and I would also put some dried bushes and reduce the amount of stones....
Title: Re: Le Survivant
Post by: Seth on November 19, 2007, 01:09:06 AM
ok thank you :)
Title: Re: Le Survivant
Post by: Sethren on November 19, 2007, 01:24:27 AM
Yes, that tree is very nice. Does need some shrubbery. The lighting takes the cake for this one.
Title: Re: Le Survivant
Post by: rcallicotte on November 19, 2007, 12:39:15 PM
Beautiful.  I especially like the lighting on the tree.  It brings the whole realism.
Title: Re: Le Survivant
Post by: Seth on November 19, 2007, 02:41:49 PM
are the fake stones better ?

(http://i20.servimg.com/u/f20/10/05/42/42/le_sur10.jpg)
Title: Re: Le Survivant
Post by: dhavalmistry on November 19, 2007, 02:56:02 PM
much better
Title: Re: Le Survivant
Post by: old_blaggard on November 19, 2007, 03:28:16 PM
Yeah, I agree with dhavalmistry.
Title: Re: Le Survivant
Post by: cajomi on November 21, 2007, 12:11:36 AM
I think with less green in the fist image it would be more the impression of a tree in a rocky landscape, which would match to only one tree in the landscape.
Title: Re: Le Survivant
Post by: Seth on November 21, 2007, 01:30:17 AM
Quote from: cajomi on November 21, 2007, 12:11:36 AM
I think with less green in the fist image it would be more the impression of a tree in a rocky landscape, which would match to only one tree in the landscape.

green ? where do you see green ?
Title: Re: Le Survivant
Post by: cajomi on November 21, 2007, 01:34:52 AM
Well, on my monitor the rocks are partly brown and green
Title: Re: Le Survivant
Post by: Seth on November 21, 2007, 09:45:14 AM
Quote from: cajomi on November 21, 2007, 01:34:52 AM
on my monitor

;D
Title: Re: Le Survivant
Post by: Seth on November 22, 2007, 06:48:35 PM
is that any better ?

(http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2182/2056139990_2a8b61e5c1_o.jpg)
Title: Re: Le Survivant
Post by: Saurav on November 23, 2007, 12:17:36 AM
In terms of composition, I think you can improve it by making the tree smaller and fitting it in the frame or alternatively zoom out a little bit. The rest looks good in my opinion.
Title: Re: Le Survivant
Post by: Seth on November 23, 2007, 01:17:38 AM
oki ! next render i'll try what you say ! i was asking myself if a more sandy mood will be better ...


(http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2056/2056010095_96a3080b00_o.jpg)
Title: Re: Le Survivant
Post by: NWsenior07 on November 25, 2007, 09:39:05 PM
Actually I kind of like this one the best. Perhaps a little less sand so the mountains come through a little better but as a whole I like this alot.
Title: Re: Le Survivant
Post by: Tangled-Universe on November 26, 2007, 02:09:49 PM
Yeah this one turned out very nice actually. I agree with NWSenior, to my taste it would be something in between the last two versions :)
Very nice work!
Title: Re: Le Survivant
Post by: Seth on November 26, 2007, 02:22:49 PM
thanks ^^
Title: Re: Le Survivant
Post by: nvseal on November 26, 2007, 02:43:52 PM
Yeah, I like this one too. Nice atmosphere.
Title: Re: Le Survivant
Post by: Seth on January 02, 2008, 10:02:34 AM
just for the fun, i rerender it bigger ;)

(http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2049/2157828147_e8c92b343f_b.jpg)


reaaaal size => ...Setherragen... (http://seth93.blogspot.com/)
Title: Re: Le Survivant *UPDATE*
Post by: rcallicotte on January 02, 2008, 10:43:12 AM
This is very nice.  I love that wind!

This is being very picky, Seth, but if those little white pebbly-like stones were darker or textured more realistically this picture would be among my favorites.  I do like it.
Title: Re: Le Survivant *UPDATE*
Post by: Seth on January 02, 2008, 10:47:52 AM
yeah i do think that those stones are too smooth !!! this work is not over yet ;)