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Title: Shai Hulud
Post by: cyphyr on May 02, 2020, 10:59:22 AM
Shai Hulud, the Great Desert Wyrm engulfs the ancient temple complex.

Objects from KitBash3D Ancient Temples.

Raw Terragen render, no post work.
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Post by: Dune on May 02, 2020, 11:02:05 AM
Great!
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Post by: raymoh on May 02, 2020, 11:12:57 AM
There must be something familiar about that, "Dune," right?

I couldn't resist the wordplay! ;D
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Post by: sboerner on May 02, 2020, 11:19:01 AM
Beautiful. Like the monochromatic tones and point of view. Looks like the opening shot of a film.
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Post by: cyphyr on May 02, 2020, 11:45:07 AM
Thanks guys :)
Originally inspired by this image.

1_THKcaVvrFs52-OLNuSbl3g-scaled.jpeg

https://thetecheducation.com/dune-2020-heres-everything-you-need-to-know/
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Post by: DocCharly65 on May 02, 2020, 12:09:43 PM
Beautiful and mysterious at the same time. Great!
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Post by: j meyer on May 02, 2020, 12:15:51 PM
Very nice and moody/atmospheric. 8)
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Post by: Kadri on May 02, 2020, 12:23:45 PM
Nice. I like the lighting, colours very much.
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Post by: Hannes on May 04, 2020, 03:47:30 AM
Love it! Indeed very cinematic!
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Post by: Tangled-Universe on May 04, 2020, 06:18:25 AM
Sweet work, very good Richard!
My only critique would be the composition.
I see you tried to avoid a centered composition, which is a great choice, but it's a bit too much I think. The greatness is stuffed into the corner now and I think it deserves better :)
As the temples and their nice volumetric shadows are the point of interest of the scene they should be (should as in what generally is consensus) not too far off center.
I think the center of the group of temples being at around a third into the composition would work best.
You would still have an off-centered composition without having the viewer need to look for what you're trying to show.

Looking forward to your next one!
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Post by: mhaze on May 04, 2020, 07:32:01 AM
Beautiful
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Post by: cyphyr on May 04, 2020, 07:46:47 AM
Thanks for the positive feedback guys :)
I do generally try for a "cinematic" look whenever possible, trying to look at images as if I were making a film. I agree that the temple complex could be a little further towards the centre conforming better to the thirds rule but I found if difficult to move it without diminishing the dune which was always the main feature of the image. In fact the temple complex was an after thought.
I'm doing a short 10sec animation at the moment which should show some slightly different perspectives but that is a week away at least (lol)
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Post by: Tangled-Universe on May 04, 2020, 11:30:43 AM
Another thing you could try maybe is to move the camera to the right and have the ribbon of dunes act like a leading line for the eye.
Then you can place the temples more towards the horizon and also respect the rule of thirds for composition as well.