24 hours to render. I'm not all that good with plants yet and working on a laptop sure doesn't help anything. I did some postwork with midtone but that's all.
i think that you have just to rotate up your camera. give some space in the picture.
yours threes cover by the shadow are spectacular . ;D
I think you've actually captured a fantastic sense of scale here. I'd move away from making it a wide format so you can maintain the lower parts of the image in view while also showing more of the sky for better composition. Either that or zoom the camera out a bit and tilt up a little, sticking with the wide format but showing a bit more of the sky.
- Oshyan
very nice...I love the grass.....
Quote from: Oshyan on December 17, 2007, 09:37:16 PM
I think you've actually captured a fantastic sense of scale here. I'd move away from making it a wide format so you can maintain the lower parts of the image in view while also showing more of the sky for better composition. Either that or zoom the camera out a bit and tilt up a little, sticking with the wide format but showing a bit more of the sky.
- Oshyan
Yes I agree to a certain extend. I think the wide format benefits the sense of depth, because this way you're more drawn into the depth of the valley. But I think a big visible sky would be distractful. I think the second option, zooming out and tilting up slightly is the best option.
Like I said at Rendero I really like this image. It is in potential one of your best works.
Martin
Great sense of scale and depth, only the foreground vegetation colour is off in my opinion, it's too saturated.
Very nice. I like the idea of opening up the top and bottom to show the vastness of the valley.
Looks good!
that's looking very close to real, great job!