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Title: Opinions Welcome
Post by: darthvader on January 30, 2008, 02:35:22 PM
Ok, this is just another scene from low orbit. I like the terrain but i'm going to reduce the cloud density and edge sharpness a bit. Also the water just doesn't look right so thats gonna take some tweaking.

Render Time: 12 hr 18min
Detail: .8
AA:5

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Title: Re: Opinions Welcome
Post by: gastar on January 30, 2008, 03:22:58 PM
the clouds in the front of you image are very beautiful.... I think the water is ok, nothing to tweak.... the mirroring of the clouds are nice... I waiting for more images from this scene.... :)

is it possible to share the clouds as a clipfile?

gastar
Title: Re: Opinions Welcome
Post by: dhavalmistry on January 30, 2008, 03:28:05 PM
I like the texturing much better in this one...
Title: Re: Opinions Welcome
Post by: rcallicotte on January 30, 2008, 03:52:53 PM
Technically, this is very good.  But (a small 'but'), there could be more diversity in color and lighting.  It's almost boring.  Sheesh.  There, I said it. A different view point or different lighting or even other colors might spice it up a bit more.

Just telling, since you're asking.  I'm not even 100% sure I could create that terrain down there.
Title: Re: Opinions Welcome
Post by: dhavalmistry on January 30, 2008, 03:55:27 PM
I kinda agree about the lighting with calico....to make the lighting interesting, you should place the sun between the secondary planet and the horizon!
Title: Re: Opinions Welcome
Post by: darthvader on January 30, 2008, 04:30:42 PM
Thanks for the comments. Gastar, if I had a clue how to post a clipfile of the clouds I would :) It may be a bit boring, but without a good basic scene nothing better can be created. I like the idea of the sun between the horizon and the moon, I have a render of that going right now and the clouds look AMAZING, kinda like fire contained in clouds ;D i'll post the render when its done, but the water makes renders take forever  :(
Title: Re: Opinions Welcome
Post by: Virex on January 30, 2008, 05:17:32 PM
If you do put the sun between the moon and the atmosphere, remember to twitch up the GI, or use fill lights. Otherwise, your mountains will be black blobs.
Title: Re: Opinions Welcome
Post by: bigben on January 30, 2008, 05:26:06 PM
Just a quick post before I start some work... 

You might want to fake some water transparency to give the impression of the terrain below the water. There are a few posts around on the subject, but basically you want to create a BW mask based on the altitude of the terrain below the water and then apply some colour to it. Mogn's smooth gradient would be perfect for the colouring part (http://forums.planetside.co.uk/index.php?topic=2968.0 (http://forums.planetside.co.uk/index.php?topic=2968.0))
Title: Re: Opinions Welcome
Post by: Mr_Lamppost on January 30, 2008, 07:49:43 PM
I am enjoying seeing the development of this scene  ;D

I know it is a long process but there have been lots of suggestions and you will have to decide which ones work.  Just remember save often  ;)
Title: Re: Opinions Welcome
Post by: darthvader on January 30, 2008, 08:45:41 PM
Oh, I am saving often, i also have about 5 different files for the scene ;D