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General => Image Sharing => Topic started by: sonshine777 on March 05, 2008, 01:05:33 AM

Title: Afternoon Reflections
Post by: sonshine777 on March 05, 2008, 01:05:33 AM
Here is an old scene revisited using my new canoes, Still some work to do but I thought I would share.

Title: Re: Afternoon Reflections
Post by: lonewolf on March 05, 2008, 07:51:58 AM
Nicely laid out scene. Good lighting. Perhaps some small bushes or grasses on the left foreground before the canoes.
Very nice overall.

Iain
Title: Re: Afternoon Reflections
Post by: rcallicotte on March 05, 2008, 09:01:07 AM
I agree with lonewolf.  This is beautiful.
Title: Re: Afternoon Reflections
Post by: dhavalmistry on March 05, 2008, 09:49:33 AM
luv it man!
Title: Re: Afternoon Reflections
Post by: inkydigit on March 05, 2008, 01:30:51 PM
very, very nice!
Title: Re: Afternoon Reflections
Post by: Tangled-Universe on March 05, 2008, 01:55:43 PM
Beautiful mood and atmo, though I think the overall tone of the image is too yellow/orange.
Like lonewolf I'd like to see some bushes or more variation on the foreground.
Perhaps a snowy top of the mountain would be a nice touch as well, though not really necessary.
I like the canoes and the way you've placed them in the scene.
The image is well balanced, good work!

Martin
Title: Re: Afternoon Reflections
Post by: sonshine777 on March 05, 2008, 02:47:13 PM
Quote from: Tangled-Universe on March 05, 2008, 01:55:43 PM
Beautiful mood and atmo, though I think the overall tone of the image is too yellow/orange.
Like lonewolf I'd like to see some bushes or more variation on the foreground.
Perhaps a snowy top of the mountain would be a nice touch as well, though not really necessary.
I like the canoes and the way you've placed them in the scene.
The image is well balanced, good work!

Martin

The atmo is one of the things to be tweaked. I'm still playing with whether or not to add bushes to the foreground mainly because the location of the camera is in an area where water would be in the winter and thus no bushes. I am however going to try some sparse grass populations. Lastly the mountain does have snow on it, but the backlighting seems to be making it less noticable.

Thanks for the comments it really helps me make the tweaks needed to complete this one.