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Title: New One WIP *Updated*
Post by: mrwho on June 11, 2008, 06:10:34 PM
Haven't posted anything in a long time, working full-time at a greenhouse/grocery store has been demanding, and I've been busy with video games, Photoshop, and movies; unfortunately leaving little time for Terragen :(  Anyways, here's a new one I thought I'd post. No texturing yet, and I found the tree here (can't remember who from though) Thoughts/comments appreciated!
Title: Re: New One WIP
Post by: old_blaggard on June 11, 2008, 06:18:54 PM
Looking great so far!  With the proper textures, this could become a masterpiece.  I am especially fond of your point of view.
Title: Re: New One WIP
Post by: mrwho on June 11, 2008, 06:20:35 PM
thanks! Not sure if I want to have the sun visible or not, leaning towards not. Also, it'd be a great one to have a nice storm in the background
Title: Re: New One WIP
Post by: rcallicotte on June 11, 2008, 07:09:00 PM
I agree this is very nice and I agree with O_B's assessment.  Then, make us a large version.
Title: Re: New One WIP
Post by: mrwho on June 11, 2008, 07:17:07 PM
Update: I suck at texturing.....
Title: Re: New One WIP
Post by: Mr_Lamppost on June 11, 2008, 07:48:00 PM
I think the grey of the mountain needs a little variation and can we have the tree and clouds back?     ;D

Onec finished this is going to very nice, the composition is excellent.
Title: Re: New One WIP
Post by: mrwho on June 11, 2008, 08:25:39 PM
yeah, i took clouds and the tree off for quicker rendering, they'll be back :P  Any suggestions or good examples of texturing? It's one thing that I've never been good at
Title: Re: New One WIP
Post by: Mandrake on June 11, 2008, 11:10:55 PM
(can't remember who from though)

That'd be me. Looks great! Top of the world shot.
Title: Re: New One WIP
Post by: Oshyan on June 12, 2008, 12:26:37 AM
For texturing advice I highly recommend Volker's approach described here: http://forums.planetside.co.uk/index.php?topic=2287.0

- Oshyan
Title: Re: New One WIP
Post by: rcallicotte on June 12, 2008, 07:27:17 AM
Oshyan is right on!  This is an excellent lesson and can be used for fake stones as well as any terrain texturing.  Moodflow has a good method he described, which is related to a fire-in-the-hole image he made.  I learned a lot from that as well.
Title: Re: New One WIP
Post by: mrwho on June 13, 2008, 08:34:00 PM
ok, an update. Did some texture work, and now I'm also adjusting the lighting and clouds; I think I prefer the second one, but I'd like a mix of the two. There are two cloud layers, besides the mist on the bottom, and I have one disabled and the 'enable primary' unchecked, so I get the lighting effect from one layer, and the clouds from another.
(http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/7950/2layersalto1hassecondarqi2.th.jpg) (http://img294.imageshack.us/my.php?image=2layersalto1hassecondarqi2.jpg)


(http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/2159/2layersalto1hassecondarzz6.th.jpg) (http://img501.imageshack.us/my.php?image=2layersalto1hassecondarzz6.jpg)


Next up: working on the foreground. The tree will return, and I'll play with adding other vegetation to it. Thoughts and comments appreciated!
Title: Re: New One WIP
Post by: rcallicotte on June 13, 2008, 11:07:16 PM
I like what you're learning.  Thanks for sharing what's going on.

Hope we get to see a finer (less grainy) version.   :D
Title: Re: New One WIP
Post by: mrwho on June 14, 2008, 12:10:23 AM
oh yes, there will be better versions to come
Title: Re: New One WIP
Post by: lightning on June 14, 2008, 12:43:13 AM
great work
looking forward to seeing the final!
Title: Re: New One WIP
Post by: Seth on June 14, 2008, 01:46:31 AM
masterpiece on the way ;)
Title: Re: New One WIP
Post by: Tangled-Universe on June 14, 2008, 04:55:05 AM
I like the sky of the second image the most and I like the surfacing of the first image the most.
This looks good so far, keep going on!

Martin
Title: Re: New One WIP *Updated*
Post by: mrwho on June 14, 2008, 10:52:45 PM
well, this is the next version. No lighting on the tree though, that'll teach me not to crop-render :P Anyways, besides that little issue, I'm planning on adding transparency to the tree, and go back to the lighting of the first image I posted (the mist looked better then IMO) And maybe some other minor changes
Title: Re: New One WIP *Updated*
Post by: rcallicotte on June 14, 2008, 11:03:25 PM
Great concept in your scene.  It's beautiful, really.  I like the tree in the front.
Title: Re: New One WIP *Updated*
Post by: Mr_Lamppost on June 15, 2008, 09:21:31 AM
A lot of good points but I think clouds and mountains from the latest version with mist and lighting from the original. 

Sometimes one part is right, you make a change that fixes another area and have to go back and change the part that was right to begin with......... ;D
Title: Re: New One WIP *Updated*
Post by: mrwho on June 15, 2008, 10:51:29 AM
yeah. I think I know what I did wrong.. I was playing with the cloud layers and enabling only the secondary lighting on one of them, and I clicked the wrong one :P I'll have to check the TGD to be sure, but I think that's what happened.