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Title: Glendale
Post by: mindsap on July 14, 2008, 04:33:41 PM
This is a work in progress, Also this is my first render in 64 bit system.  All comments welcome. 
Title: Re: Glendale
Post by: Tangled-Universe on July 14, 2008, 04:35:47 PM
This looks good so far.

I agree with Sjefen about the yellow parts and the GI.
I think the yellow parts is just the soil and if so, I think you should try to add some bump and color variations.
Like I said in Sjefen's image-thread I like the tree-model but the bark-textures aren't really good.
You might try these if you'd like:

http://forums.planetside.co.uk/index.php?topic=3693.msg38179#msg38179 (http://forums.planetside.co.uk/index.php?topic=3693.msg38179#msg38179)

If the results look good I can send you the full-res versions of the textures.
And oh yes...the grasses are very nice indeed!

Martin
Title: Re: Glendale
Post by: sjefen on July 14, 2008, 04:41:48 PM
Yeah.... I can't see the image.
Title: Re: Glendale
Post by: mindsap on July 14, 2008, 04:42:50 PM
How do I attach the image? ???
Title: Re: Glendale
Post by: sjefen on July 14, 2008, 04:49:04 PM
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Title: Re: Glendale
Post by: mindsap on July 14, 2008, 04:52:04 PM
Thanks sjefen, It was right there and I could not see it.
Title: Re: Glendale
Post by: sjefen on July 14, 2008, 05:05:58 PM
I think it's nice, but I don't understand what the yellow part is. I also think a little more GI would be better.

Where did you get the grass from? It looks very good.
Title: Re: Glendale
Post by: mindsap on July 14, 2008, 05:25:13 PM
The grass is modified from one of lightnings sets.   And thanks TU I'll  try that.  I agree you can't really makeout the middle ground, I'll work on that also.
Title: Re: Glendale
Post by: rcallicotte on July 14, 2008, 09:27:15 PM
This is cool.  A little more randomness among the trees would be better.
Title: Re: Glendale
Post by: Oshyan on July 14, 2008, 11:44:55 PM
It looks like reflectivity/specularity is present on the leaves which is giving them an odd blue cast on the top of some - I'd disable that or significantly reduce it. You also might want to add or increase translucency on the leaves.

- Oshyan
Title: Re: Glendale
Post by: inkydigit on July 15, 2008, 06:36:26 AM
looks good so far, look forward to seeing the next version!