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General => Image Sharing => Topic started by: crosseout on October 09, 2008, 11:45:50 AM

Title: whats missing here?
Post by: crosseout on October 09, 2008, 11:45:50 AM
I had a vision, but this just didnt reach up to it.... whats wrong, is it the light, the composition? oh well, ill try something else...
Title: Re: whats missing here?
Post by: PG on October 09, 2008, 12:08:26 PM
Well from personal opinion I'd say the water look a bit weird and the shadow on that foreground rock looks bizarre considering the direction the light is coming from. Is there something just of the edge of the frame that's causing that shadow?
Title: Re: whats missing here?
Post by: RogueNZ on October 09, 2008, 09:15:03 PM
Rocks look good, i'd say the water is way to reflective/not rough enough and the sky is quite blue, and the shadows are really dark. Try focusing the camera more on the rock face in left/middle of the image. Nice effort thoguh
Title: Re: whats missing here?
Post by: MacGyver on October 10, 2008, 12:09:39 PM
I agree, the shadow looks weird and everything else is blue... perhaps a "bonsai on the rocks" would do the trick ;)