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Title: My first upload...(Updated)
Post by: aokcub on November 02, 2008, 09:48:14 PM
I used palm tree object.
http://forums.planetside.co.uk/index.php?topic=2288.0
Thank you to Mr.Miley and Harvey Birdman!

640x480
Detail:0.8
AA:3
GI:2,2,8

I hope your advice ;)

Thank you.
Title: Re: My first upload...
Post by: Zairyn Arsyn on November 02, 2008, 10:23:33 PM
you should render it larger and with more detail.
you could add some size/rotation variation two the grass population, thats about the only thing that bothers me about this rendering,
the palm trees look fine.
Title: Re: My first upload...
Post by: Mohawk20 on November 03, 2008, 06:43:09 AM
Great colours, great sky. Bigger definitely!

Grass could be a bit darker perhaps, but that depends on the species...
Title: Re: My first upload...
Post by: rcallicotte on November 03, 2008, 07:35:23 AM
I agree with these assessments.  Go for bigger and then you'll have more opportunity to play with more (virtual) real-estate.
Title: Re: My first upload...
Post by: Mr_Lamppost on November 04, 2008, 06:18:19 PM
I have to agree, the only weak point is the grass.  Looking at the settings I assume that you are using the Free version so larger would not be an option no matter how desirable.
Title: Re: My first upload...
Post by: aokcub on November 04, 2008, 07:20:13 PM
Thanks, all!

I'm using free version so maximum size is 800x600 and detail is 1.0

Ummm...
I think the grass is weak point, too.
ok, I'll try again.
Title: Re: My first upload...
Post by: aokcub on November 08, 2008, 02:01:10 AM
I rendered again.
Size:800x600
Detail:1.0
AA:3
GI:2,2,8
Supersample prepass

Using lightning grass pack.Thanks!
Title: Re: My first upload...
Post by: Mohawk20 on November 08, 2008, 03:34:42 AM
It's really nice!
Grass could have been a bit longer, but that's your choice.

I really like the light and sky. Did you only use one sun? What atmo settings did you use to get these colours?
Title: Re: My first upload...
Post by: mr-miley on November 08, 2008, 05:47:08 PM
Verrry nice. This has turned  out to be a really nice render. Love the colours. I agree with Mohawk20 about the grass, but as he said, thats just personal taste  ;D

Miles
Title: Re: My first upload...(Updated)
Post by: aokcub on November 09, 2008, 06:27:35 AM
>>Mohawk20
Yes, I used one sun. I had tried using second sun but one sun was better.
I changed many parameters to get these colours.
Atmosphere, Sunlight, and Enviro light.
But I think that I could get these colour without changing Enviro light parameters...
I'll attach .tgc file. Please refer to it.

>>Mr.Miley
I couldn't make this image without your palm trees  :D
Thank you very much.

Certainly, I think that the grass could have been longer ;D