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Title: Canadian memories
Post by: PorcupineFloyd on January 19, 2009, 03:08:24 PM
From my "Canada" series.

This time (finally) Terragen renders - 5 and 6.

Same scene but different POV. 6 rendered way smaller as this POV requires more computing.

EDIT: DA links in case someone would like to download those pictures in bigger res. - Canada 5 (http://porcupinefloyd.deviantart.com/art/Canada-5-109896927) and Canada 6 (http://porcupinefloyd.deviantart.com/art/Canada-6-110008298). Click "Download" on each page for big picture.

Title: Re: Canadian memories
Post by: timtierney on January 19, 2009, 04:17:37 PM
Looks Amazing.  Good sense of distance.
Title: Re: Canadian memories
Post by: Mohawk20 on January 19, 2009, 04:26:28 PM
The clouds are super realistic, great work!

The hill looks a bit too smooth, but then I've never been to Canada...
Title: Re: Canadian memories
Post by: Tangled-Universe on January 19, 2009, 04:38:54 PM
I really like the second one. Very good render quality. Nice trees and great clouds.
The only thing you should really improve is the scale of the water. You should make it at least 3 times smaller or maybe even more to match them to the size of the trees and hills/mountains.
Then add a tiny bit more haze and the sense of scale and depth will be amazing probably.

Martin
Title: Re: Canadian memories
Post by: PorcupineFloyd on January 19, 2009, 04:46:52 PM
Thanks for comments everyone!

Yes, I still need some practice to make interesting displacements on areas without vegetation.

And what about this water - It's the same water as in C5 but yes - in this case scale is a bit too big.
What kind of haze are you referring to? Atmosphere haze or fake cumulus haze on some specific height?
Title: Re: Canadian memories
Post by: PG on January 19, 2009, 04:53:01 PM
Yeah the second one is the best, I love the water in both. The colours are brilliant and I reckon the scale is ok.
Title: Re: Canadian memories
Post by: Tangled-Universe on January 19, 2009, 04:58:21 PM
Quote from: PorcupineFloyd on January 19, 2009, 04:46:52 PM
Thanks for comments everyone!

Yes, I still need some practice to make interesting displacements on areas without vegetation.

And what about this water - It's the same water as in C5 but yes - in this case scale is a bit too big.
What kind of haze are you referring to? Atmosphere haze or fake cumulus haze on some specific height?

Well, at second sight/thought I think the haze is fine. Adding more will end up in losing detail.
I meant atmospheric haze by the way.

Quote from: PG on January 19, 2009, 04:53:01 PM
Yeah the second one is the best, I love the water in both. The colours are brilliant and I reckon the scale is ok.

I just don't agree, sorry.

When choosing scales I always imagine someone swimming in the water and when I do that (sounds ridiculous but I really do) with this picture the trees will look like bushes. :)
Title: Re: Canadian memories
Post by: PorcupineFloyd on January 19, 2009, 05:39:32 PM
After reading your comments and having a second look on Canada 6 I think that wave scale might be ok (maybe a little lower) but then a number of waves should be limited and that might be a hard thing to do.

Or hm... It's a lake after all, not a windy sea.

I'll have to rework the water someday.
Title: Re: Canadian memories
Post by: Saurav on January 19, 2009, 05:40:49 PM
Great renders, both very realistic. Water scale issue aside, it could also do with some shores/beach in places.
Title: Re: Canadian memories
Post by: rcallicotte on January 20, 2009, 07:23:51 AM
This is fine work.  Very realistic and beautiful, too.
Title: Re: Canadian memories
Post by: MacGyver on January 20, 2009, 02:23:08 PM
They look like photographs to me! :o
Title: Re: Canadian memories
Post by: PG on January 20, 2009, 03:26:49 PM
Quote from: Tangled-Universe on January 19, 2009, 04:58:21 PM
Quote from: PG on January 19, 2009, 04:53:01 PM
Yeah the second one is the best, I love the water in both. The colours are brilliant and I reckon the scale is ok.

I just don't agree, sorry.

When choosing scales I always imagine someone swimming in the water and when I do that (sounds ridiculous but I really do) with this picture the trees will look like bushes. :)

Depends on the size of the person.
Title: Re: Canadian memories
Post by: PorcupineFloyd on January 20, 2009, 03:57:29 PM
Quote from: PG on January 20, 2009, 03:26:49 PM
Quote from: Tangled-Universe on January 19, 2009, 04:58:21 PM
Quote from: PG on January 19, 2009, 04:53:01 PM
Yeah the second one is the best, I love the water in both. The colours are brilliant and I reckon the scale is ok.

I just don't agree, sorry.

When choosing scales I always imagine someone swimming in the water and when I do that (sounds ridiculous but I really do) with this picture the trees will look like bushes. :)

Depends on the size of the person.


You made my day PG - thank you :D
Title: Re: Canadian memories
Post by: Tangled-Universe on January 21, 2009, 06:19:31 AM
Quote from: PG on January 20, 2009, 03:26:49 PM
Quote from: Tangled-Universe on January 19, 2009, 04:58:21 PM
Quote from: PG on January 19, 2009, 04:53:01 PM
Yeah the second one is the best, I love the water in both. The colours are brilliant and I reckon the scale is ok.

I just don't agree, sorry.

When choosing scales I always imagine someone swimming in the water and when I do that (sounds ridiculous but I really do) with this picture the trees will look like bushes. :)

Depends on the size of the person.

Haha, you got me there :D ;D
Well, you know what I mean of course :)
Title: Re: Canadian memories
Post by: Tangled-Universe on January 21, 2009, 06:20:22 AM
By the way, I could make my point better when showing it ;)
Title: Re: Canadian memories
Post by: PorcupineFloyd on January 22, 2009, 06:52:26 PM
Updated.

I've tried to lower the water scale and do something with sand/beaches. Well as for the water - it's ok but sand looks weird to some extent. But it rendered big this time.

DA link for bigger version - link (http://porcupinefloyd.deviantart.com/art/Canada-6-Updated-110362461)
Title: Re: Canadian memories
Post by: rcallicotte on January 22, 2009, 10:12:37 PM
Wow.  Great.
Title: Re: Canadian memories
Post by: efflux on January 23, 2009, 06:07:26 PM
Atmosphere and clouds are just right. Composition and POV are very good. The parts without trees could do with some more rough texture. The shore needs to slope into the water but that's not so easy in TG2. This is where a curve graph would come in useful.
Title: Re: Canadian memories
Post by: Mr_Lamppost on January 24, 2009, 07:53:08 PM
I have to agree the wave scale looks a lot better in the update.  Those clouds are spot on by the way. ;D