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Title: After The Rain (WIP)
Post by: Seth on February 10, 2009, 08:04:33 PM
I want to try some big clouds too !!!  ;D
ok they are not the same but I kind of like them  :P
This is just a WIP but sometimes, hearing comments at this part of the render might be a good idea... You just don't know what people will say !
Title: Re: After The Rain (WIP)
Post by: leafspring on February 10, 2009, 08:17:43 PM
The terrain and haze are perfect. I like it a lot. :)
The structure of the clouds as well but imo they look somewhat artificial. A tad too smooth and polished.
Title: Re: After The Rain (WIP)
Post by: Saurav on February 10, 2009, 08:37:22 PM
I actually like this quite a lot, the mood adds depth to the landscape.
Title: Re: After The Rain (WIP)
Post by: matrix2003 on February 10, 2009, 08:43:21 PM
Just make it a darker / more menacing day, but preserve the reflectivity.  Looks great!
Title: Re: After The Rain (WIP)
Post by: rcallicotte on February 10, 2009, 11:12:08 PM
Clouds are a little too dense, I'm thinking...
Title: Re: After The Rain (WIP)
Post by: FrankB on February 11, 2009, 02:17:21 AM
I like it as it is. The ground is simple, yet effective and looking good!
The clouds are good, too, although maybe they could be a little less dense and a little less tall, .... but hey, they could also look exactly like they are now :-)

Cheers,
Frank
Title: Re: After The Rain (WIP)
Post by: Seth on February 11, 2009, 02:56:17 AM
thanks Frank :)
Title: Re: After The Rain (WIP)
Post by: GioMez on February 11, 2009, 03:03:15 AM
Lovely atmosphere!
I also like the stones!

Great work :)
Title: Re: After The Rain (WIP)
Post by: Seth on February 11, 2009, 03:40:24 AM
by the way, clouds' density is set to 0.02...
Title: Re: After The Rain (WIP)
Post by: Tangled-Universe on February 11, 2009, 04:33:05 AM
Well we all know cloud settings aren't telling much.
For example the 0,02 for density you mentioned Franck.

The edge sharpness and especially the lighting can make them look very dense, although the density is actually very low.
So maybe it is better to say that they 'look' dense rather than 'being' dense.

I really like the atmosphere in this picture. Certainly gives you the impression that it has just stopped raining. Dense atmo and speculars really aid in this effect. However, I tend to agree with Frank on the size of the clouds, though they look good!
Good work!

Martin
Title: Re: After The Rain (WIP)
Post by: Seth on February 11, 2009, 04:56:53 AM
mmmh...
strange, i found them far less dense and smaller than almost all the clouds i see in here these days ^^
and they are rain's clouds ;)
anyway, I heard your comments and after the render i am doing, i'll work on the clouds !
Title: Re: After The Rain (WIP)
Post by: schmeerlap on February 11, 2009, 05:41:06 AM
Might as well add my twopence-halfpenny worth; for me there could be more contrast in the clouds to give them more pop.

John
Title: Re: After The Rain (WIP)
Post by: mr-miley on February 11, 2009, 07:57:36 AM
Outstanding render  ;D One of my favorite renders for a while. The "atmosphere" is fantastic and very realistic. I love the clouds as they are. I think they have a very "real world" look about them. Not photographic, just very "real". If you ever fancy rendering this one nice and large it would make a great poster / wallpaper.

Miles
Title: Re: After The Rain (WIP)
Post by: domdib on February 11, 2009, 10:33:47 AM
I also think that the atmosphere is very convincing.
Title: Re: After The Rain (WIP)
Post by: rcallicotte on February 11, 2009, 11:22:04 AM
Oh, yeah, sorry Franck.  This is an exceptional image.  I just saw the clouds needed improvement - bad habit.   I'll break it.

Title: Re: After The Rain (WIP)
Post by: Seth on February 11, 2009, 11:42:43 AM
huhu no you're right, the clouds do need improvement ^^
Title: Re: After The Rain (WIP)
Post by: rcallicotte on February 11, 2009, 12:14:29 PM
The atmosphere is excellent, the water is perfect and rocks / terrain are exceptionally realistic. 

And your lighting is sensational.  What do you think?
Title: Re: After The Rain (WIP)
Post by: Seth on February 11, 2009, 12:55:34 PM
I think i prefer when you write critical comments ;)
Title: Re: After The Rain (WIP)
Post by: rcallicotte on February 11, 2009, 01:34:36 PM
LOL

Quote from: Seth on February 11, 2009, 12:55:34 PM
I think i prefer when you write critical comments ;)
Title: Re: After The Rain (WIP)
Post by: Seth on February 11, 2009, 04:22:04 PM
still playing...
some pw on this one though
Title: Re: After The Rain (WIP)
Post by: FrankB on February 11, 2009, 04:34:16 PM
interesting... has a somewhat eerie mood, too :-)
Title: Re: After The Rain (WIP)
Post by: rcallicotte on February 11, 2009, 07:16:55 PM
Okay.  A comment, as you like - the clouds are perfect from the left side to about a little over the middle way and then there is something chalky looking in them.  Otherwise, as I said before, this is stunning.  Please don't give up, because I believe you have a top-notch image coming here.

Title: Re: After The Rain (WIP)
Post by: Seth on February 11, 2009, 07:47:59 PM
thanks ! ^^
you're right about the clouds... i need to find what's wrong  ^^
Title: Re: After The Rain (WIP)
Post by: Mandrake on February 11, 2009, 08:18:37 PM
I like the first one better, are you starting to tweak the color? I'd like to see what you come up with when you have multiple layers of your clouds with slightly tweaked colors. I like yoour clouds!
Title: Re: After The Rain (WIP)
Post by: Seth on February 11, 2009, 08:36:12 PM
multiple layers... that will be the next step... first i need clouds that fit my taste :D
Title: Re: After The Rain (WIP)
Post by: mr-miley on February 12, 2009, 04:10:38 AM
Nice.... but I much prefer the clouds in the first version.

Miles

<<Edit>>  Sorry Franck, that was not the most helpful comment I could have made  ;D The reason I like the clouds better in the 1st one is they are less defined and less "organic" looking. They have the look of clouds that have just dropped their rain and are now moving off somewhere else (possibly to pick up some more rain  :) ) I think their lighting and "haziness" fits much better with the rest of the scene.

Hope thats a bit more helpful  ;D

Miles
Title: Re: After The Rain (WIP)
Post by: Seth on February 12, 2009, 05:45:08 AM
yeah and i must say i totally agree with you mr-miley :)
i much prefer the first ones too !
Title: Re: After The Rain (WIP)
Post by: Mandrake on February 12, 2009, 04:46:36 PM
Quote from: Seth on February 11, 2009, 08:36:12 PM
multiple layers... that will be the next step... first i need clouds that fit my taste :D
Are you sure about those steps?
Title: Re: After The Rain (WIP)
Post by: choronr on February 12, 2009, 10:30:41 PM
My goodness, I can almost hear the rumblings of thunder in the distance ...now that is realism. I prefer the first image. It gives the feeling of 99% humidity. Extra fine work here.