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Title: picnic v2
Post by: inkydigit on March 24, 2009, 03:54:17 PM
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putting the latest alpha build through its paces, I revisited a previous render, new pov, atmo tweaks ( also added a single cloud layer) also another tree population, thanks to terragen.org, klas and lightning fror the vegetatioin....minor pw=auto levels etc...thanks for taking time to view or comment as these are always welcome and appreciated
Title: Re: picnic v2
Post by: FrankB on March 24, 2009, 04:28:40 PM
Hi Inky,

the trees are some nice models. All in all the scene is good, but I still have a few sugestions for you to try.
1 - use much higher AA, and also I suggest using the smooth AA filter.
2 - the ground would benefit from some height variations. It it's too flat, the grasses look like mown. You can add a little size variation through the populator, but not too much. Instead, add a power fractal to the terrain, which creates little billowry bumps - just slightly. That way, the grasses seem more uneven, without getting out of scale.
3 - The clouds could blend better with the sky I think. It would also add to the realism, it they were less scattered. Reducing the fractal noise can help, but also increasing the gamma, in case you had lowered it before.
4 - Adding a powerfractal to the rocks to displace the fake stones further would help remove the sharp lines on the rocks, hence add to realism again.

Cheers,
Frank
Title: Re: picnic v2
Post by: inkydigit on March 24, 2009, 05:14:18 PM
thanks for your honest input frank...really appreciated!...I will definately revisit this scene and attempt your suggestions,
Cheers
Jason
btw, the quality settings were quite low for this render(0.6) (GI 2/2) AA default, rendered on my imac 2.4ghz dualcore, 3gb Ram, in about an hour and a quarter or so...
Title: Re: picnic v2
Post by: rcallicotte on March 24, 2009, 09:07:14 PM
Wow.  Not much to add, since I'm learning from Frank's suggestions as well.  Thanks Frank.

Inky, your work is very nice, though, and I love the lighting.  The point of view is pleasant.