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Title: No Fishermen *V2* and final
Post by: FrankB on May 12, 2009, 12:14:20 PM
... just salt.

Regards,
Frank

## V2 further down the thread ##
Title: Re: No Fishermen
Post by: Seth on May 12, 2009, 12:18:56 PM
nice shot Frank ^^
Title: Re: No Fishermen
Post by: RArcher on May 12, 2009, 12:21:56 PM
Love the super wide angle where you can see the curvature.  If you can rough up and add some negative displacement to the grave marker that would be even better, it seems a bit to clean and perfect as is.  Also there is something wrong with the white stones to me, perhaps it is just that my fake stones turn out like this all the time and I just don't like them.  Great picture though, the scale is truly amazing.
Title: Re: No Fishermen
Post by: Phylloxera on May 12, 2009, 12:49:40 PM
Beautiful and originally render !
Title: Re: No Fishermen
Post by: ra on May 12, 2009, 01:08:36 PM
Outstanding! Damn this is cool and somehow reminds me of "Pirates of the Caribbean"  :o
Just great!
Title: Re: No Fishermen
Post by: rcallicotte on May 12, 2009, 01:33:27 PM
Cool catch.  Great find of sunlight.
Title: Re: No Fishermen
Post by: MacGyver on May 12, 2009, 01:39:43 PM
This image is telling a whole story :) Anyone noticed the house in the background? :D
Title: Re: No Fishermen
Post by: buzzzzz1 on May 12, 2009, 01:56:30 PM
Looks Good! The Fish are Happy as Hell too!
Title: Re: No Fishermen
Post by: JimAward on May 12, 2009, 02:15:42 PM
Intriging composition and atmosphere. Very good.
Title: Re: No Fishermen
Post by: FrankB on May 12, 2009, 02:27:00 PM
thanks!

@Ryan: there is going to be a version 2. I just wanted to show the almost finished version earlier to get some feedback. The tombstone definitely would benefit from some roughness. I will see to that. Also the fake stones will be improved, that's for certain. There is no wide angle thought. In fact the camera FOV has been reduced a lot. The curvature that you see is a nice side effect, but it's due to an optical illusion, caused by the terrain.

@Jay: yes the fish are happy ... in hell. No water, no fish. Life's a bitch ;D

Frank
Title: Re: No Fishermen
Post by: domdib on May 12, 2009, 03:59:00 PM
High quality as always. My only cavil - just a tad too much of that eye-searingly white salt in the composition.
Title: Re: No Fishermen
Post by: FrankB on May 12, 2009, 04:14:02 PM
Quote from: domdib on May 12, 2009, 03:59:00 PM
High quality as always. My only cavil - just a tad too much of that eye-searingly white salt in the composition.

what would you expect from a long dried out salt lake? ;D
Title: Re: No Fishermen
Post by: EoinArmstrong on May 13, 2009, 08:46:30 AM
Atmo settings are excellent, particularly.
Title: Re: No Fishermen
Post by: FrankB on May 13, 2009, 02:17:06 PM
2nd and final version. Thank you for your help thus far :)

Cheers,
Frank

PS: forgot to mention that I am using two species of a beta version of Walli's upcoming NWDA grasses in this render.
Title: Re: No Fishermen *V2* and final
Post by: MacGyver on May 13, 2009, 02:50:36 PM
Did you add a grain effect to the clouds? In case you did, it works fine, in case you didn't, never mind ;)
Title: Re: No Fishermen *V2* and final
Post by: FrankB on May 13, 2009, 02:51:30 PM
yes i did, but very softly. good eye!
Title: Re: No Fishermen *V2* and final
Post by: schmeerlap on May 13, 2009, 03:31:30 PM
Edges of stone cross still too cgi sharp. I like the addition of grass round casket, which has taken advantage of a leakage.

John
Title: Re: No Fishermen *V2* and final
Post by: MacGyver on May 13, 2009, 03:54:17 PM
Quote from: FrankB on May 13, 2009, 02:51:30 PM
yes i did, but very softly. good eye!

Nice touch! ;) Well, either that or it's the long hours in front of the PC that make everything look a bit grainy :P
Title: Re: No Fishermen *V2* and final
Post by: Seth on May 13, 2009, 04:02:33 PM
very good Frank !
Title: Re: No Fishermen *V2* and final
Post by: darthvader on May 14, 2009, 01:19:45 AM
Both are very nice images :), though I prefer the first one, it just looks...cleaner.
Title: Re: No Fishermen *V2* and final
Post by: efflux on May 16, 2009, 07:13:26 PM
I actually like the first one best. It looks more desolate. I really like the contrast of the very bright foreground and gloomy sky in distance. Trees fit nicely.