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General => Image Sharing => Topic started by: Falcon on June 17, 2009, 01:12:19 PM

Title: Mountain River
Post by: Falcon on June 17, 2009, 01:12:19 PM
Certainly not the quality some here achieve, but nevertheless, one of the pictures I'm fairly happy with. Some more work and it can look good:
Title: Re: Mountain River
Post by: deepdish on June 17, 2009, 02:23:17 PM
My only problem with it is that the green down on the banks doesn't look very convincing. Reduce the coverage to break that up a bit, I guess. Other than that, excellent
Title: Re: Mountain River
Post by: Henry Blewer on June 17, 2009, 02:37:29 PM
I think your strata layering is excellent. I agree with deepdish, the green should be broken up some. It is a nice spring, new leaf color, so I would keep it. It's just too regular. A few large fake stones at the base of the cliffs would be cool also.
Title: Re: Mountain River
Post by: rcallicotte on June 17, 2009, 02:47:01 PM
I especially like the distant red strata in the second image.   Cool point of view.  Pretty good lighting.   8)
Title: Re: Mountain River
Post by: Phylloxera on June 18, 2009, 12:27:04 PM
It uninteresting is not put that misses a little realism all the same! To begin again and improve!
Title: Re: Mountain River
Post by: EoinArmstrong on June 19, 2009, 10:24:34 AM
I love the strata, but the pic is missing depth/realism due to a lack of shadows defining the terrain - I can only see cloud shadows... maybe it's just me :)

Edit: the more negative comment was in respect of the 2nd image!