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Title: Creek in swampy lowland
Post by: Dune on June 29, 2009, 03:01:20 AM
Here's my latest WIP; a tidal creek in a Dutch, swampy Stone Age landscape. The only thing added was the smoke and some 'things' near the cabin. The cabin itself, the poles and hanging skin and fish (not very detectible at this size) I made in XFrog. I am not yet satisfied with the lighting, the far cloud shadows are too harsh, I want it more mysterious before rendering at 4000px wide. Any comments to improve?

---Dune
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Post by: EoinArmstrong on June 29, 2009, 03:06:02 AM
Awesome yet subtle use of masks and objects - I love the natural colours and superb sense of depth in this one :D
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Post by: Jack on June 29, 2009, 03:54:09 AM
very nice scene it just needs to be brighter
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Post by: schmeerlap on June 29, 2009, 04:33:54 AM
An excellent render. I particularly like your inclusion of points of interest such as the camp fire, fallen trees, paths, and your considered deployment of trees. One of the best in the realism genre I've seen.

John
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Post by: domdib on June 29, 2009, 04:56:01 AM
The grass shaders on the fields are fantastic - how are you doing them?
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Post by: FrankB on June 29, 2009, 05:32:48 AM
Excellent detail!
I love the fireplace, always wanted to do something like that myself.

Cheers,
Frank
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Post by: PorcupineFloyd on June 29, 2009, 05:57:25 AM
One of the best TG2 pictures I've seen! Perfect!
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Post by: Henry Blewer on June 29, 2009, 08:12:31 AM
There is really little to improve. I did not see anything. It's beautiful, realistic, and best of all very interesting.
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Post by: Tangled-Universe on June 29, 2009, 08:14:05 AM
Very nice resemblence of the Dutch polders :)
I think all the elements are very well executed.
Excellent variety in foliage and very nice details in the camp.
The only minor crit I have is that I'd like to see some more transparency in the water and perhaps also some smaller wavescale.
Can you post some close-ups of the camp for the example?

Martin
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Post by: rcallicotte on June 29, 2009, 08:58:03 AM
I agree with everyone's comments - this is a beauty.
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Post by: Zairyn Arsyn on June 29, 2009, 09:20:02 AM
I love it! :) :) :)

what were your render settings?
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Post by: littlecannon on June 29, 2009, 10:20:51 AM
This is one cool image, very realistic... even down to the little worn paths through the woods to the river.
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Post by: dandelO on June 29, 2009, 10:24:56 AM
That grass! Fantastic, Dune. Well done.
Lovely image, I like the hint of life and activity in the near-ground, gives it that little extra something.
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Post by: Seth on June 29, 2009, 10:47:56 AM
nice shot
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Post by: Dune on June 29, 2009, 11:14:07 AM
Here's some details, straight from the renderer. As said, the campfire and such were done in PS, so it's not 100% TG. I found it too much trouble to make another mask for the paths if it's so easy to add later. Render settings for this one were originally 1600px wide, from memory detail 0.5, AA 0.5 (or is it 5?), Mitchel filter with bloom. I just tried the Catmull filter but that seems to take much longer. I don't really know which one would be best for foliage. One added light at 0.4 opposite the sun, GI and such default.
The grass was one layer with a colour fractal, a separate displacement fractal (sizes 0.01/0.01/0.01), 3 more (children) colour fractals, and one more reed layer as a top child, with a constant displacement of 0.3, and pushed to the back with a distance shader (I didn't want the light reed colours near the camp).
The ground is made up of three masks; one for the creek, one with some black waterspots for the next kilometer or so (repeated X-wise), and one simple white mask (enlarged) for the part near the horizon, also repeated.
The water is very dark indeed, it's supposed to be murky; a mask for the mud, with a blackish colour and a reflective shader as a child, the whole layer at 0.9. You're right about the wave scale, Martin. I made them very small already, but see if I can make them even smaller.
I am supposed to make this one about 5000 px wide, so I hope my machine will oblige.

---Dune
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Post by: Dune on June 29, 2009, 11:15:40 AM
And another detail, more upcreek.
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Post by: Tangled-Universe on June 29, 2009, 02:33:38 PM
I love these close-ups. Like your previous work it all looks so "alive" and realistic.
I'm really wondering how stuff like this would look when it's rendered at just some bit higher settings, say 0.65 quality and AA7 for example.
Yes, it would take about twice as much time at most, but the result will be even more terrific.
Is this also for a book (same perhaps?) and therefore the high-res output?

By the way, in your second close-up the waterscales don't look that very big. Still a bit too big, but not as much as in the main shot. A bit strange, probably me :)
Have you tried the fake volumetrics of the watershader to simulate mud?
I've already seen you're quite comfortable with manipulating water, perhaps something nice for you to dive into.

Martin
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Post by: tee on June 29, 2009, 02:57:21 PM
Pretty dam stunning piece of work, the amount of detail in this is incredible. Pretty sure my machine would just laugh at me if I tried to render this.
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Post by: Dune on June 29, 2009, 03:57:50 PM
Well, I'm not gonna try rendering this until tomorrow morning, as I do want a good nights rest. I've had some problems starting a large render, and can get quite disturbed and not sleep over it.
I need this for a book, yes, and, no I didn't use the volumetric desnity of the water, although I know it works kind of similar to what I did here. But I wanted a muddy shore anyway, so why not put some mud colour over the whole botom at the same time.
I figured that this render at 4800 px wide would take about 6 times it did for a 1600 px render, which was 2.45 hours. So I might try a higher detail. On the other hand, I did some tests a while ago and didn't see a huge improvement. It might be easier to (like TG) do a slightly larger render and decrease size in PS.

---Dune
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Post by: Tangled-Universe on June 29, 2009, 04:10:52 PM
Quote from: Dune on June 29, 2009, 03:57:50 PM
Well, I'm not gonna try rendering this until tomorrow morning, as I do want a good nights rest. I've had some problems starting a large render, and can get quite disturbed and not sleep over it.
I need this for a book, yes, and, no I didn't use the volumetric desnity of the water, although I know it works kind of similar to what I did here. But I wanted a muddy shore anyway, so why not put some mud colour over the whole botom at the same time.
I figured that this render at 4800 px wide would take about 6 times it did for a 1600 px render, which was 2.45 hours. So I might try a higher detail. On the other hand, I did some tests a while ago and didn't see a huge improvement. It might be easier to (like TG) do a slightly larger render and decrease size in PS.

---Dune

Ghehe, I recall a similar discussion about this in your previous work's topic. I understand the increase in detail increases rendertime but I'm absolutely sure that it pays off in comparison to rendering it bigger and downscaling it. I think there are plenty examples showing that. However, if this approach gives the desired result for a book-print then why mess with it. I understand your feelings for rendertime, not your reasoning though :) lol
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Post by: choronr on June 29, 2009, 06:37:21 PM
Close-up or distant, you've got a real goodie going on here!
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Post by: Falcon on June 30, 2009, 01:36:37 AM
Absolutely brilliant.

I do agree, though, that slightly higher detail settings and AA would probably improve it. The detail shot seems to have some hard noise in it that gives it an artificial look, the only reason why it doesn't seem to be a photo.
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Post by: Dune on June 30, 2009, 02:40:56 AM
Thanks for all the compliments, guys. The hard noise might be the in promptu sharpening I did in Irfanview for this detail. Not the most subtle way, I confess. But, you may have convinced me to try some higher detail and AA. I'll do some detail tests first. And I will add another fallen tree (or two) at the far bank, where the creek turns left and eats from the sides. It's just the place, and will give another point of interest.
I don't know if more detail and higher AA will cause a crash easier than a bigger render. I wouldn't mind about the time really, as I have another machine steadily working on it, whilst doing my normal work on this one. I'm not sure about the filter as well, but I'll test that as well.
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Post by: Dune on June 30, 2009, 09:05:41 AM
What I dreaded happened; unknown errors, so I stopped after 3 hours (only tiny dots visible, and I couldn't see it working) and changed some settings. GI was 2/2/8 and is now: 1/1/2. I kept detail at .65 and AA 7. Changed the size from 4800 px wide to 4400 wide and now render in 6 crops. At least it's working now. I'll keep you posted.
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Post by: Dune on July 02, 2009, 12:32:50 PM
Well, I've got him nailed. Total image 4400 x 2600px, took about 30 hours @ detail .65 and AA 7, GI 1/1/2. Here's a detail, without any postwork except curves. I might post the total later, but I would like to enter this one for the contest. At 1600 px wide and less than 250 kB the total thing won't survive, though. It has incredible detail and that will diminish into jpg artifacts. What to do? Enter anyway?

---Dune
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Post by: domdib on July 02, 2009, 03:17:52 PM
You could always enter a crop. Also, if you check the NWDA competition thread, there's some discussion right now about the 250 kb limit.
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Post by: Henry Blewer on July 02, 2009, 04:08:40 PM
Will FrankB and NWDA accept jpeg2000? It does a better job. Personally I like PNG.
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Post by: Dune on July 13, 2009, 05:16:17 AM
Well, here's the final image I entered in the contest (I mailed it, guys). Due to all the structures it had to be a small one, to keep it under 250kB. But you should see the detail in the large sized picture!

---Dune
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Post by: domdib on July 13, 2009, 05:19:50 AM
Great image. You could always post the bigger one over at Ashundar.
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Post by: Henry Blewer on July 13, 2009, 07:59:52 AM
Great render! The distribution of the various terrain types really makes this picture.
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Post by: Seth on July 13, 2009, 08:16:45 AM
Quote from: Dune on July 13, 2009, 05:16:17 AM
But you should see the detail in the large sized picture!

---Dune

create a deviantart account and post it there...
or create a free blog/website and post your productions there too.
the 512 Ko limit of the Planetside forums can be annoying too ;)