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Title: Winter Arriving (Updated and Finished)
Post by: RArcher on August 10, 2009, 12:51:53 PM
Just playing around with a few things.  The snow is Martin's NWDA Snow Pack. Trees, bushes and grasses are from Walli.

Rendered at:

Detal: 1
AA: 10
GI: 1/4
1600 x 1000

A little over 10 hours render time.

Thanks for taking a look!

*Update on Page 2*
Title: Re: Winter Arriving
Post by: MacGyver on August 10, 2009, 01:10:55 PM
Nice, quiet scene. A lot of winter pictures coming out at the moment, is it already this late in the year? ;)
I wonder what the background would look like with a bit of DOF applied...
Title: Re: Winter Arriving
Post by: Tangled-Universe on August 10, 2009, 01:58:57 PM
Wow wow wow...the atmosphere is simply outstanding! Very natural scene.
I like the way you distributed the trees. Perhaps a bit low dense here and there, but the breakup looks really nice and aids in depth-perception.
I'm not sure if the dry-bushes would really fit in a scene like this, but heck...they look nice :)
The foreground surface and shore could use some work I think. Perhaps a rockbed or other details could help.

Cheers,
Martin
Title: Re: Winter Arriving
Post by: Naoo on August 10, 2009, 02:33:02 PM
Hi

Oh yeah!
I agree with Tangled-Universe.


ciao
Naoo
Title: Re: Winter Arriving
Post by: schmeerlap on August 10, 2009, 03:00:02 PM
I like your mist setting which gives a good sense of depth to your terrain.

John
Title: Re: Winter Arriving
Post by: mhaze on August 10, 2009, 03:17:42 PM
beautiful

Mick
Title: Re: Winter Arriving
Post by: Gannaingh on August 10, 2009, 03:39:45 PM
Absolutely beautiful!
Title: Re: Winter Arriving
Post by: Henry Blewer on August 10, 2009, 05:58:56 PM
It's like the old prints from a photo magazine. Really beautiful.
Title: Re: Winter Arriving
Post by: Seth on August 10, 2009, 06:05:42 PM
very good atmo !
I love the water too
Title: Re: Winter Arriving
Post by: jcinbama on August 10, 2009, 07:56:13 PM
Very nice great job , thought it was a photo at first :o :o :o
Title: Re: Winter Arriving
Post by: RArcher on August 10, 2009, 09:48:09 PM
Thanks for the comments everyone.  I think Martin nailed the few things I don't like about it, but they are fixable.  The background trees do need more density, I was being stingy to cut down populating time.  The foreground bank needs more work as well.  My favorite parts are the sky the water and the mountains, I just need to make the rest match.
Title: Re: Winter Arriving
Post by: Phylloxera on August 11, 2009, 01:54:03 AM
Good atmo ! I like the foreground !
Title: Re: Winter Arriving
Post by: Dune on August 11, 2009, 02:07:24 AM
Absolutely amazing image! I love the contrast between sky and foreground. It has a very tranquil mood, great for a very large render to hang in the bathroom to stare at from under the shower. How did you get the whiteness in the sky, just high atmo?
Title: Re: Winter Arriving
Post by: cyphyr on August 11, 2009, 04:29:58 AM
I miss the summer already :( There is a chill in the air.
I really like the contrast between the softness of the sky and the quite stark foreground, love the snow too, if I cant figure out how its done I just might have to buy Martins snow pack ;)
Richard
Title: Re: Winter Arriving
Post by: FrankB on August 11, 2009, 04:32:02 AM
sky is top notch, Ryan! The rest is also great, but the sky is simply awesome!

Cheers,
Frank
Title: Re: Winter Arriving
Post by: Phylloxera on August 11, 2009, 07:33:54 AM
successful water!
Title: Re: Winter Arriving
Post by: efflux on August 11, 2009, 09:07:50 AM
Very nice.
Title: Re: Winter Arriving
Post by: littlecannon on August 11, 2009, 07:06:45 PM
Wow.... and I like the colour variation the dry bushes give.The atmo is top notch, you can almost see that big cloud rolling in.
Cheers, Simon.
Title: Re: Winter Arriving
Post by: RArcher on August 12, 2009, 08:30:14 PM
An Update!  Brightened things up just a little bit, re-did the foreground, increased the density in the back trees somewhat, re-did the background hills surfacing, and most important left the water and clouds alone!  This one is likely finished now as another rough but promising scene is coming along.

Thanks everyone for your suggestions and encouragement.

Dune:  The bright sky is a combination of increasing camera exposure, positioning the sun just out of camera shot on the left, and an increased haze density.

Title: Re: Winter Arriving
Post by: Gannaingh on August 12, 2009, 08:31:38 PM
Dang! I didn't think there was much to imporve on from your first image, yet somehow you managed it!
Title: Re: Winter Arriving (Updated and Finished)
Post by: Henry Blewer on August 12, 2009, 09:22:26 PM
This is really beautiful. I'm looking forward to winter, but I'd settle for a day here.
Title: Re: Winter Arriving (Updated and Finished)
Post by: Tangled-Universe on August 13, 2009, 04:35:49 AM
I love this one Ryan! Very beautiful work, thanks :)
Title: Re: Winter Arriving (Updated and Finished)
Post by: Naoo on August 13, 2009, 05:26:16 AM
Hi

Again WOW!
Realy nice update.

Only the trees are a bit bit to -- sharp/hard (sorry I don't know better english words).


ciao
Naoo
Title: Re: Winter Arriving (Updated and Finished)
Post by: inkydigit on August 13, 2009, 05:31:26 AM
excellent work!
Title: Re: Winter Arriving (Updated and Finished)
Post by: MacGyver on August 13, 2009, 08:04:03 AM
I think that's some good tweaking you did here, even the small things that a very sharp eye could spot in the first render are now perfect! :)
Title: Re: Winter Arriving (Updated and Finished)
Post by: Dune on August 13, 2009, 08:37:58 AM
Fantastic, congratulations! I really like the subtle contrasts. There's one thing though; there seems to be some repetitiveness (looks like cloning) in some grassy areas. Is there a reason why this could have happened? It's minor, you have to look closely to see it, but it's there.
Title: Re: Winter Arriving (Updated and Finished)
Post by: RArcher on August 13, 2009, 09:31:06 AM
You've got one hell of a sharp eye Dune.  There were a couple hard edges on the closest grass populations that I softened a little with the clone brush.  There may be one final update coming after I finish the next render I'm working on just to give a little more variation in the grass, but not much else would change, if I even bother.

Thanks for the comments everyone.
Title: Re: Winter Arriving (Updated and Finished)
Post by: Lupina on August 13, 2009, 09:54:45 AM
I love version 2 :)
Title: Re: Winter Arriving (Updated and Finished)
Post by: FrankB on August 13, 2009, 06:40:16 PM
Great render, Ryan, again :-)
Another candidate for your NWDA gallery.
Cheers,
Frank
Title: Re: Winter Arriving (Updated and Finished)
Post by: Volker Harun on August 14, 2009, 05:17:36 AM
The sky is astonishing!
Title: Re: Winter Arriving (Updated and Finished)
Post by: mesocyclone on August 19, 2009, 03:01:13 AM
Beautiful render at all, but the sky is breathtaking!
The anvil shape in the clouds resembles a dying storm in the horizon.
Very well done, congrats!  ;D