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Title: WiP - Fluke II
Post by: Naoo on August 21, 2009, 08:04:31 AM
Hi

Last Year (befor Terragen ;) )  I made this image with Bryce.
Here You see the first step to do it better in TG.
Ideas are wellcome...


ciao
Naoo

PS: Fluke made in Blender.
PPS: Idea from an old Image.
Title: Re: WiP - Fluke II
Post by: domdib on August 21, 2009, 08:08:25 AM
Well, the obvious suggestion is to include some terrain - some nice cliffs perhaps? Placing and scaling them so as to add interest to the image, given the dominance of the tail, might be a challenge. Perhaps you might need to pull back from the tail a bit to give room for other features.
Title: Re: WiP - Fluke II
Post by: FrankB on August 21, 2009, 08:14:45 AM
I think Dominic's suggestions are good. Zoom out a little and think of how you can add e.g. a far away island or cliff, birds....
Title: Re: WiP - Fluke II
Post by: Saurav on August 21, 2009, 08:36:40 AM
I like the composition as it is now, for me it doesn't need the cliffs etc. Whats missing for me is the reflective shader on the tail and some details on the skin.
Title: Re: WiP - Fluke II
Post by: Dune on August 21, 2009, 08:55:06 AM
Right, details like pocks and scars. And perhaps some foamy, rougher water around the tail.
Title: Re: WiP - Fluke II
Post by: aymenk2003 on August 21, 2009, 11:34:33 AM
same suggestion as Dune & Saurav some wetness on the tail...
Title: Re: WiP - Fluke II
Post by: Gannaingh on August 21, 2009, 12:31:08 PM
I will echo the previous three posts :) I like the idea of this piece; it's really unique and different fom what normally is seen.
Title: Re: WiP - Fluke II
Post by: Zairyn Arsyn on August 21, 2009, 01:00:34 PM
i agree with Saurav, the tail could definately use some more detailing, it looks rather plain and flat.
though I like everything else about this render.
Title: Re: WiP - Fluke II
Post by: Naoo on August 21, 2009, 04:03:46 PM
Hi

Oh WOW so many answers :)

I think there are two posibilities for a picture with the fluke. One to ad an island or a cliff... like domdib and FrankB said. The second is to leave it solo. This is what I wish (first).

Added bump and spec...


ciao
Naoo
Title: Re: WiP - Fluke II
Post by: domdib on August 21, 2009, 04:35:47 PM
Going down this route, I'd say that adding some droplets falling from the tail would be good. Not sure how you'd do it though...
Title: Re: WiP - Fluke II
Post by: Dune on August 22, 2009, 03:37:23 AM
Tke a painted shader, paint a little white around the tail and add a surface layer with some displacement and foam, blended by this painted shader. A low quality cloud, at sea level, blended by the same or another painted shader might give you the droplets...
And a small horizon, or a misty background in which the ocean dissappears.

---Dune
Title: Re: WiP - Fluke II
Post by: Volker Harun on August 22, 2009, 04:16:11 AM
The second one is really an improvement.
There once was a thread about adding water ripples due to water drops ... maybe the same technique can be used to add some wilder displacements on the water around the fluke. ,-)

Volker
Title: Re: WiP - Fluke II
Post by: Naoo on August 22, 2009, 04:45:58 AM
Hi

Thanks! Yes, droplets are still missing, but the are the difficult part for me. I will try it Dune's way...

I think now the tail is to light (not black) and one Problem the horizont is hidden behind the waves. Therefore the hard end...


ciao
Naoo
Title: Re: WiP - Fluke II
Post by: Volker Harun on August 22, 2009, 05:12:55 AM
It is getting better and better ...
Title: Re: WiP - Fluke II
Post by: ra on August 22, 2009, 05:17:39 AM
I ike the last one! Texturing and the foam are well done!
Title: Re: WiP - Fluke II
Post by: Naoo on August 22, 2009, 07:30:52 AM
Hi

Uff, very tricky :-/

These are too many individual droplets (like spray, image left side).

For the tail tip, it should rather look as if you have a glass of water from tipping.

How to make an imported object transparent? Then could I use a water curtain created in Blender (image right side).

ciao
Naoo

PS: Sorry for the bad English (the computer had to help in the translation)
Title: Re: WiP - Fluke II
Post by: Henry Blewer on August 22, 2009, 03:25:07 PM
To get the water droplets in Blender, you could use the fluid sim/solver. It does a really good job.
Render the frame in Blender you like best. The camera POV must match Blender's and Terragen's. You can save the fluid object out as a wave front object. Import this into Terragen and use projection from camera for the Blender fuild render onto the wavefront object.
Or reverse it and use Blenders composting suit, which I've seen used in tutorials but never tried.
Title: Re: WiP - Fluke II
Post by: Naoo on August 22, 2009, 04:44:40 PM
Hi

@ njeneb: Okay, but I would prefer to render the water with TG.
But how? My previous attempts have failed.

Now there are little drops (a cloud layer) around the tail.
And the skin is darker (maybe to dark)?


ciao
Naoo

Title: Re: WiP - Fluke II
Post by: Henry Blewer on August 22, 2009, 10:20:20 PM
The only way to get a particle system for water drops is an external source. After the mesh has been imported, add Terragen 2's water shader. I am getting ready for work, another 12 hour shift. I'll see what I can figure out, but it's going to be a while.
Title: Re: WiP - Fluke II
Post by: Tangled-Universe on August 23, 2009, 06:11:00 AM
Very nice update Naoo. The skin is indeed somewhat dark but I don't find it unrealistic at all.
The reflections and "wetness" of the skin is a bit unrealistic maybe, though I like those reflections :)

I'm really looking forward to see if njeneb is able to make this scene work together with blender's fluid sim and of course he hopefully writes a (short) tutorial on how to do these kind of things? :)

Martin
Title: Re: WiP - Fluke II
Post by: Dune on August 23, 2009, 06:16:05 AM
Perhaps a plane object perpendicular to the sea level, right where the tail end is, then add a (transparant) surface layer and small fake stones as child. To get the plane transparant you might need a default shader. I did a test with falling rock some time ago, but abandoned it. But it did kind of work.

Or draw a line (first change your view temporarily to right down) under the tail end, then use this painted shader as a blend shader for a low detail cloud, small scales.
Title: Re: WiP - Fluke II
Post by: Seth on August 23, 2009, 06:16:16 AM
very good idea, nicely done.
good job !
Title: Re: WiP - Fluke II
Post by: Dune on August 23, 2009, 08:49:32 AM
I wipped a little test...
Title: Re: WiP - Fluke II
Post by: domdib on August 23, 2009, 02:32:25 PM
Very interesting Dune - nice to see how a minor suggestion can turn into some real TG2 creativity.
Title: Re: WiP - Fluke II
Post by: Naoo on August 23, 2009, 05:14:29 PM
Hi :)

I tried Dune's Version. It's easy and nice to do, but not smooth enough for big drops of water (see image). I will try it again.
So long I'm looking forward to njeneb idea...


ciao
Naoo
Title: Re: WiP - Fluke II
Post by: Dune on August 24, 2009, 02:27:36 AM
Well, then, perhaps a swarm of spheres, reflective of course, blended by a stretched fractal and sitting on the same transparant plane...

This kind of looks like shattered glass, but if you decrease the stone size and the amount, and stretch the blend fractal a bit, it would look better.

Good luck, and I too look forward to njeneb's solution.

---Dune
Title: Re: WiP - Fluke II
Post by: Phylloxera on August 25, 2009, 05:49:52 AM
Quote from: Naoo on August 22, 2009, 04:45:58 AM
Hi

Thanks! Yes, droplets are still missing, but the are the difficult part for me. I will try it Dune's way...

I think now the tail is to light (not black) and one Problem the horizont is hidden behind the waves. Therefore the hard end...


ciao
Naoo

Great work !