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Title: Sunset ship
Post by: riche on December 15, 2009, 09:51:54 AM
used one of the models from Ashundar, think it was one of ogre's, took 10 hrs 22mins to render :S

as always please give feedback
Title: Re: Sunset ship
Post by: Henry Blewer on December 15, 2009, 09:57:40 AM
The ship needs a little bit of lighting. The sky is good and the waves look great. Try adding ambient occlusion with the sun's color.
Title: Re: Sunset ship
Post by: riche on December 15, 2009, 10:51:48 AM
Think on reflection, I've missed the running lights from the ship... will add abit of lighting
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Post by: Kadri on December 15, 2009, 11:38:16 AM
Good render , Riche .

Kadri.
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Post by: Linda McCarthy on December 15, 2009, 12:10:02 PM
Beautiful mood piece, Rich.  I agree that a wee bit more light would make it even better.  Nicely done.  Linda
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Post by: BTilson on December 15, 2009, 04:19:04 PM
Wow this is excellent. Very photorealistic. It definitely seems like something I would see in real life.
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Post by: inkydigit on December 15, 2009, 05:21:52 PM
very good sea swell, and sunset/clouds!
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Post by: MGebhart on December 15, 2009, 11:41:16 PM
Great Work.

Marc
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Post by: Malcolm79 on December 16, 2009, 01:58:55 AM
Great composition! But too dark...may be better to use a higher value of camera exposure?
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Post by: FrankB on December 16, 2009, 02:25:20 AM
great mood in this! I don't find it too dark. It's just about right on my screen :)

Cheers,
Frank
Title: Re: Sunset ship
Post by: Dune on December 16, 2009, 02:47:36 AM
Just a little bluish fill light from the front might make it even better, I think. As if there's reflection from a huge iceberg...
Title: Re: Sunset ship
Post by: riche on December 16, 2009, 07:15:23 AM
Quote from: BTilson on December 15, 2009, 04:19:04 PM
Wow this is excellent. Very photorealistic. It definitely seems like something I would see in real life.

Funnyily enough, I'm ex-royal navy and have been in seas like that... scarey