still playing around with palms...
DJ
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Nice render especially the green water ...
N_KAID
I like this. I think this could be improved by adding a surface layer with the strata plugged into the surface layer. Turn off the color (? try it with a rock color variation) and reduce the coverage to 60%. This will break up the layering, which I think is too strong.
I think the water is too green (but a little murky green is nice), and the water is too rough. But a great start and POV/composition.
Very interesting green water! But I would have tried to find a better POV. Good work at all!
The green of the water is interesting, yet it looks like you can walk on it as it is thick as jelly... maybe a bit more transparency would help?
Lovely lighting and wonderful colours - I agree about the water - great start, though
Great POV and lay of the land! I like the Palms. Linda
Quote from: DJ on December 29, 2009, 02:48:37 PM
still playing around with palms...
DJ
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Thank you all for your comments.
Here's another version with some improvements and another POV.
DJ
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the update is nice, like an oasis!
Reminds me of the backgrounds in picture books of Dinosaurs. It's a very good start. I am not sure how to offer any ways to make it better.
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Lovely!
Quote from: DJ on January 05, 2010, 12:28:19 PM
Thank you all for your comments.
Here's another version with some improvements and another POV.
DJ
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Great pov and colours - might be nice to see one with a slightly stronger lighting and more contrast...?
Nice image. Like EoinArmstrong said by changing the Sun position you could get another feel .
Kadri.