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Title: Amphora Luminis/exoplanet no. 6 wip
Post by: Zairyn Arsyn on January 28, 2010, 06:57:00 PM
just started this project a day or so ago...
:)

full resolution ver.:
http://-zagadka-.deviantart.com/art/Amphora-luminis-wip-152094799

C & C always welcome
Title: Re: Amphora Luminis/exoplanet no. 6 wip
Post by: Walli on January 29, 2010, 02:35:21 AM
wow, thats not a good place for insects though ;-)
Title: Re: Amphora Luminis/exoplanet no. 6 wip
Post by: EoinArmstrong on January 29, 2010, 04:01:14 AM
Nice concept - I like the clarity and the lighting on the plants
Title: Re: Amphora Luminis/exoplanet no. 6 wip
Post by: Zairyn Arsyn on January 29, 2010, 03:39:01 PM
walli, i think your Amphora Luminis is the most realistic object i have used so far :)

got another render going right now..
Title: Re: Amphora Luminis/exoplanet no. 6 wip
Post by: FrankB on January 29, 2010, 04:44:37 PM
hmm, I don't know... The scene as a whole is not your best, please forgive me saying that. The population is terminates in line with the horizon, and there's little variation on the ground. What if you add a few very low rolling hills, a couple fake rocks and a few other species?

Cheers,
Frank
Title: Re: Amphora Luminis/exoplanet no. 6 wip
Post by: Henry Blewer on January 29, 2010, 09:50:45 PM
I agree with Frank on this one. This plant needs a tight camera shot, against a rock and/or tree with some interesting stuff around it.

This is a good way to test the object. I don't use so many instances, but I do a render with several rotations and scales represented.
Title: Re: Amphora Luminis/exoplanet no. 6 wip
Post by: Marcos Silveira on January 31, 2010, 12:47:03 PM
It remembers me an alien landscape i did way ago...
http://forums.planetside.co.uk/index.php?topic=3596.0 (http://forums.planetside.co.uk/index.php?topic=3596.0)
Title: Re: Amphora Luminis/exoplanet no. 6 wip
Post by: Zairyn Arsyn on February 03, 2010, 08:38:23 AM
starting off on this project was a troublesome one,
i'm currently remaking most of this scene, different terrain, adding stones, dense patches unusally colored grass underneath the Amphora Luminus..i'll add more stuff as i go along.

i'll have another render out sooner or later
Title: Re: Amphora Luminis/exoplanet no. 6 wip
Post by: Henry Blewer on February 03, 2010, 08:45:28 AM
I am Looking forward to see your next render! 8)
Title: Re: Amphora Luminis/exoplanet no. 6 (new version)
Post by: Zairyn Arsyn on February 08, 2010, 07:40:13 PM
here is the latest version i've came up with :)
Title: Re: Amphora Luminis/exoplanet no. 6 wip
Post by: choronr on February 08, 2010, 09:31:08 PM
That reddish ground cover sets off the plants nicely.
Title: Re: Amphora Luminis/exoplanet no. 6 wip
Post by: Henry Blewer on February 09, 2010, 07:56:30 AM
I like the reddish color for the grass also. This is a very good start. Keep going!
Title: Re: Amphora Luminis/exoplanet no. 6 wip
Post by: Zairyn Arsyn on February 09, 2010, 08:21:23 AM
im still tweaking the terrain, might add some additional vegitation too