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Title: Majestic - WIP
Post by: Gannaingh on February 03, 2010, 09:27:21 PM
As you can tell from this image I have been inspired by the work that wetbanana has done recently. This is an early draft of the scene, the only thing that will for sure stay the same is the terrain. Everything else: trees, sky, planets, etc. will be tweaked and worked on in future version. The main planet is textured with nvseal's planetary clouds and surface. Any comments and suggestions are welcome.

http://gannaingh32.deviantart.com/art/Majestic-WIP-152829847
Title: Re: Majestic - WIP
Post by: EoinArmstrong on February 04, 2010, 03:35:47 AM
This is a well-worked version - the large planet is superb looking - nice work!
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Post by: Henry Blewer on February 04, 2010, 04:12:41 AM
Really nice looking space scene. I may try one someday.
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Post by: Jack on February 04, 2010, 04:15:36 AM
very Nice ;D! it is always a complement when other artists get inspiration from my art cheers man:)

now I would change the vegetation or maybe add a broadleaf or a small conifer species amongst the tall Serbians^^
I also suggest you run the image through an hdri program such as photomatix and apply some tone mapping to get the trees to glow (they are to dark at the moment. keep the planets (THEY ARE PERFECT!) maybe get em glowing abit in PS and to top it all off add a flock of birds or a distant space cruiser;)!  
Title: Re: Majestic - WIP
Post by: Gannaingh on February 04, 2010, 04:17:37 PM
Thanks everybody!
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Post by: FrankB on February 04, 2010, 04:28:57 PM
I like it very much, great mood in this. I don't find the trees too dark.
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Post by: domdib on February 04, 2010, 05:34:40 PM
Great use of tree pops - did they really push up render time?
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Post by: trailgirl on February 04, 2010, 05:40:39 PM
Great scene, it is definitely majestic. Love the planets.
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Post by: glen5700 on February 04, 2010, 06:43:44 PM
I love the use of a forest and then the planets in the background, make's me wish I could sit there for a while.

Nice one,
Glen
Title: Re: Majestic - WIP
Post by: Gannaingh on February 04, 2010, 11:40:36 PM
As far as I know the trees don't have too big of an impact on the scene. Most of the render time is due to the large percentage of the scene covered by water and by the surface detail and atmospheres of the background planets (especially the big one)...but then again I haven't done any full resolution crop renders of the same area with and without the trees so I cannot be certain in my assessment ;)
Title: Re: Majestic - Update
Post by: Gannaingh on February 06, 2010, 01:51:29 PM
A bit of an update on this one. The crop focuses on the background planets just to get a better glimpse of the detail. I discovered that most of my render time on the planets was due to an extra planet, with the same position as the big, that for some reason was active and causing lag due to extra calculations.

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Title: Re: Majestic - WIP
Post by: Henry Blewer on February 06, 2010, 03:34:52 PM
This looks like a whole new scene. Nice work. It might be interesting to give the larger planet some color variation for it's clouds.
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Post by: dwilson on February 06, 2010, 07:15:56 PM
i love the color spectrum and lighting in both. -Devin
Title: Re: Majestic - WIP
Post by: Kadri on February 07, 2010, 09:26:32 AM
Nice scene , Darthvader1.

Kadri.
Title: Re: Majestic - WIP
Post by: Gannaingh on February 11, 2010, 07:15:54 PM
A bit of an update on the foreground. I've completely redone the trees, replacing the firs with some of Walli's pines. However I'm not happy with them...there is just something that doesn't seem right about them. Ideas anybody?

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Title: Re: Majestic - WIP
Post by: Henry Blewer on February 11, 2010, 08:49:52 PM
I would use Walli's pines and the Grand Fir mixed together in clumps. Marc Gebhart's pines also look very nice. Open up some pars of the shore for grasses and/or shrubs. The differing vegetation and breakups will look more natural.
Title: Re: Majestic - WIP
Post by: Gannaingh on February 11, 2010, 10:22:58 PM
More variation in the vegetation will definitely help, unfortunately I don't know think adding bushes and grasses would help much since the shore line is so far away from the camera...but I will experiment. ;)
Title: Re: Majestic - WIP
Post by: Jack on February 11, 2010, 11:01:03 PM
Quote from: darthvader1 on February 11, 2010, 10:22:58 PM
More variation in the vegetation will definitely help, unfortunately I don't know think adding bushes and grasses would help much since the shore line is so far away from the camera...but I will experiment. ;)

Why not use dandelo's fake grass?
Title: Re: Majestic - WIP
Post by: Gannaingh on February 12, 2010, 12:28:10 AM
 ::) Silly me, how could I forget about that?! I'll try it out but I am unsure of how it will turn out due to the harsh lighting; I may have to lighten the terrain some to get it to show up.
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Post by: Henry Blewer on February 12, 2010, 08:38:53 AM
It may be enough to have the shoreline break up a little in places. Clumps of trees or clumps of no trees.
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Post by: choronr on February 12, 2010, 09:57:59 PM
In all, I like it just the way it is ...marvelous creation!
Title: Re: Majestic - WIP
Post by: Gannaingh on February 17, 2010, 10:53:14 AM
It's been too long since I've last updated but here the next full version finally is. I like the trees better in this one and I think I am close to finished with the clouds. However I did forget to enable some of the planets and I also want to work more on the primary moon/background planet's clouds.

http://gannaingh32.deviantart.com/art/Majestic-WIP-152829847
Title: Re: Majestic - WIP
Post by: Henry Blewer on February 17, 2010, 11:13:55 AM
I like this version very much. It's been a really awesome image right along, but this one is the best,
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Post by: nvseal on February 17, 2010, 12:12:01 PM
This looks very good. I really like the composition.
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Post by: cyphyr on February 17, 2010, 12:53:49 PM
Beautiful, lovely clouds both on this planet and the next :)
Richard
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Post by: ra on February 17, 2010, 02:52:45 PM
Very nice scene! Well done!
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Post by: Gannaingh on February 17, 2010, 05:20:15 PM
Thanks everybody :) This has really been a fun image to work on, even if it takes a while to get right.
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Post by: freelancah on February 19, 2010, 08:39:58 AM
Gotta say I love this image. Especially the colors. Would make a nice wallpaper if the resolution would be a tad bit bigger!
Title: Re: Majestic - WIP
Post by: Gannaingh on February 19, 2010, 11:26:26 AM
Thank you! I definitely will be rendering a 1920 x 1200 or possibly a tad larger for those people with giant monitors ;D
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Post by: Seth on February 19, 2010, 12:22:11 PM
how did i miss this thread ?!
very good job ! lovely composition, i really like the mood of this render !
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Post by: Tangled-Universe on February 24, 2010, 04:17:00 AM
Very cool image the last one.
I like the small moon which adds a rather surreal but awesome depth to the image.
Very nice atmospherics as well!

Martin
Title: Re: Wonder - Final
Post by: Gannaingh on February 25, 2010, 08:59:37 PM
I think I'm done with this one; whenever I go to add something I just end up staring at it without making any changes...so here it is. Everything is terragen except for the stars, the birds, and some layer adjustments. As requested I've rendered it at 1920x1200 for all those people with absurdly large monitors ;D It has been a lot of fun making this and I would like to thank you all for your encouragement and suggestion throughout the process...also, a special thanks to MGebhart, your trees are awesome!

http://gannaingh32.deviantart.com/art/Wonder-155430571
Title: Re: Majestic - WIP
Post by: FrankB on February 26, 2010, 02:47:53 AM
That's really a masterpiece of yours! Fantastic work.
Congratulations!
Frank
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Post by: freelancah on February 26, 2010, 09:55:46 AM
Congrats on finishing it. Awesome!
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Post by: RArcher on February 26, 2010, 10:04:17 AM
This turned out incredible!  Great job sticking with it until you were happy.
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Post by: Gannaingh on February 26, 2010, 05:01:42 PM
Thank you very much  :)
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Post by: Kadri on February 26, 2010, 05:07:28 PM
I like absurd monitors  :)

Thanks , Darthvader1 .

Kadri.
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Post by: choronr on February 26, 2010, 11:14:31 PM
A very striking picture; well done! Could you imagine the pull of gravity with a large planet so close?
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Post by: freelancah on February 28, 2010, 05:50:40 AM
Congrats ;)
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Post by: Gannaingh on February 28, 2010, 12:19:10 PM
Thank you for the Daily Deviation nomination freelancah, it is really quite a pleasant surprise  :)