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Title: Khiorang beach
Post by: Mor on March 31, 2010, 06:29:27 AM
I've been very busy at work lately and haven't had time to do much with tg. Something I managed to get under work at least. This image represents rocky shore of Khiorang, which is a nation located my and my friends long time fantasy world project (www.melnworld.com). I'm quite happy with the displacements and coloring and accidentally succeeded in creating nice water eroded lower parts of the rock :D
I'm not quite happy with the vegetation yet as they are just thrown in. I used Marc Gebhart's black oak and Walli's dry bushes.

(http://www.melnworld.com/tg2/khiorang_beach.jpg)
(again full 1920*1280 size view through right mouse click :))
Title: Re: Khiorang beach
Post by: Henry Blewer on March 31, 2010, 08:07:00 AM
The populations are the only thing  which stands out as needing work. Nice work on the cliffs!
Title: Re: Khiorang beach
Post by: Zairyn Arsyn on March 31, 2010, 10:52:08 AM
good work on the cliffs, well done, except the pop' on the bottom of the cliff looks kinda off,

might want to make the water a little more transparent if you want.
Title: Re: Khiorang beach
Post by: Mor on March 31, 2010, 11:33:55 AM
Yes, I just noticed that I forgot to change the terrain where the populations are sitting, thats why some of the are floating in the air :)
Title: Re: Khiorang beach
Post by: inkydigit on March 31, 2010, 12:22:26 PM
great shoreline and cliff!
Title: Re: Khiorang beach
Post by: Gannaingh on March 31, 2010, 01:29:40 PM
Great scene, very nice water!
Title: Re: Khiorang beach
Post by: Mor on April 02, 2010, 04:28:12 PM
Little changes to the vegetation and now all plants also sit firmly on ground they are supposed to :) Some more transparency added for the water and played a bit with the clouds.
Thanks for viewing.

(http://www.melnworld.com/tg2/khiorang_beach2.jpg)
Title: Re: Khiorang beach
Post by: MGebhart on April 02, 2010, 04:54:49 PM
Excellent!

Marc
Title: Re: Khiorang beach
Post by: Henry Blewer on April 02, 2010, 05:37:50 PM
Excellent! I 2nd Marc's opinion. I really like the clouds.
Title: Re: Khiorang beach
Post by: Kadri on April 02, 2010, 06:30:55 PM

Nice image ! Especially the right side looks like a photo Mor  :)
Title: Re: Khiorang beach
Post by: Dune on April 03, 2010, 02:43:31 AM
Very photographic indeed, and a nice POV and composition. Beach and water are superb, the transition water to sky is very subtle, but I'm only distracted by the bushes clinging to the lower rocks. I would delete them, or put a small grove of trees+bush somewhere under the cliff. Like a Robinson Crusoe little paradise.

---Dune
Title: Re: Khiorang beach
Post by: Mor on April 03, 2010, 02:59:19 AM
Thanks for comments everyone!
@Dune Yes, I thought it too should I put the bushes at all, but decided to throw them in :) I'll give it a try to delete them.