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Title: Watch Your Step
Post by: adit on March 14, 2007, 04:14:51 PM
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Clicks it!

This is a work in progress. The theme is inspired by the ashundar monthly featured image contest for march "A Long Drop Down"

Now, for some reason I don't think it's done. It needs some more post work, but I can't really decide what to do.

What do you guys think?
Title: Re: WIP: Watch Your Step
Post by: old_blaggard on March 14, 2007, 04:51:48 PM
That's a pretty intimidating terrain :).  I would decrease the sun stength a little so that we can see the terrain better.
Title: Re: WIP: Watch Your Step
Post by: child@play on March 14, 2007, 05:23:37 PM
hey!

nice image, really, but i think the shadows to the left look kinda 'wrong'...
changing the sun's strength or adding a second sun with low strength could probably help giving the terrain more 'depth'
Title: Re: WIP: Watch Your Step
Post by: fmtoffolo on March 14, 2007, 05:56:36 PM
Wow, its very impressive, and it really gives a feeling of something monumental in size
Title: Re: WIP: Watch Your Step
Post by: Oshyan on March 14, 2007, 06:41:41 PM
There's some odd coloration on the foreground terrain - post processing, or just odd lighting calculations, I can't tell. Other than that I honestly think it's stunning! A really nice image, extremely dramatic, a nice ethereal quality. Yes it's a bit bright, perhaps even "blown out", but I think that contributes to the epic, magical quality in this case, especially with the rays.

- Oshyan
Title: Re: WIP: Watch Your Step
Post by: adit on March 14, 2007, 08:11:09 PM
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I went ahead and toned down the sun a little and got rid of some of the silly postwork. (The odd coloration that Oshyan was talking about).

Posted it on deviantart here: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/50869458/

I think I'm happy with it now, so I changed the thread title.
Title: Re: Watch Your Step
Post by: child@play on March 14, 2007, 09:57:10 PM
very nice! the clouds come out much better now, and the terrain looks more 'solid'.

i love it


cheers...
Title: Re: Watch Your Step
Post by: sonshine777 on March 14, 2007, 10:41:17 PM
Second Image definitely much better enough so that you notice the castle on that middle point (if it's not a castle it sure looks like one) Great Render! :)
Title: Re: Watch Your Step
Post by: rcallicotte on March 15, 2007, 11:19:20 AM
Wow!  You're second image here is much better.    :o

Are those clouds in the far distant sky?  Also, I'd like to see more light hitting something in the foreground just a touch like that rock on the left.  But, I'm not making this one.  Good job.
Title: Re: Watch Your Step
Post by: adit on March 15, 2007, 12:30:07 PM
Yes, that is a castle. I wanted to make it subtle enough to add to that mystical quality. Thanks all.
Title: Re: Watch Your Step
Post by: rcallicotte on March 15, 2007, 05:29:44 PM
I didn't see the castle (on the right) - cool!  No, what I meant was the lighting on the foreground rocks at the front.  I think this is very cool and think a bit more somehow at the foreground would be great. 

I wonder if there is some way to make the castle stand out against the terrain by using a different or more contrasty texture?  I know we can change the contrast in the Default Shader, but I'm not sure how much this would help.
Title: Re: Watch Your Step
Post by: Dark Fire on March 16, 2007, 01:34:09 PM
That picture is very good. I particularly like the style and distribution of the clouds beneath the camera level...
Title: Re: Watch Your Step
Post by: Mr_Lamppost on March 16, 2007, 09:50:45 PM
Cool image :)

I didn't see the castle first time

Do you have an upper cirrus cloud layer or is there a lighting artefact showing up in the sky? (Banding top left)?
Title: Re: Watch Your Step
Post by: Arandil on March 17, 2007, 06:59:55 AM
There's something about the clouds that seems just a bit off but I can't put my finger on it.  Something about the lighting/shading.  Should they be darker?  Hmmm, maybe it's the subjective impression of distance that gets me.

That's just a weedly nitpick though, great image!
Title: Re: Watch Your Step
Post by: Dark Fire on March 17, 2007, 10:58:57 AM
Quote from: Mr_Lamppost on March 16, 2007, 09:50:45 PM
Cool image :)

I didn’t see the castle first time

Do you have an upper cirrus cloud layer or is there a lighting artefact showing up in the sky? (Banding top left)?

I can see the banding too. It looks like there is a huge light-blue cloud up there...
Title: Re: Watch Your Step
Post by: adit on March 17, 2007, 12:45:49 PM
Dark Fire's got it,

it was part of post-working it. Overlayed a cloud image to give the sky slightly more variation.
Title: Re: Watch Your Step
Post by: Dark Fire on March 17, 2007, 09:26:51 PM
Well that's OK then. I like it!