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Title: yellow field [final FINAL 08-01-2013]
Post by: Walli on July 24, 2013, 05:33:17 am
early wip of a scene I am working on.
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Title: Re: yellow field [WIP]
Post by: Jonathan on July 24, 2013, 05:40:57 am
Smashing render - I love the tranquility of the scene - and must be modelled on the UK as the sun is shining (finally!).
Title: Re: yellow field [WIP]
Post by: Saurav on July 24, 2013, 07:14:29 am
Beautiful scene, looking forward to the high res versions and if/when you will sell your fence model. :)
Title: Re: yellow field [WIP]
Post by: inkydigit on July 24, 2013, 08:08:58 am
a great field of beautiful looking plants, and a cool fence too!
:)
Title: Re: yellow field [WIP]
Post by: Tangled-Universe on July 24, 2013, 08:47:48 am
Very nice Walli :)

I have (or had may be) the exact same idea for a scene when I bought your latest flowers.
Last year I was in east-germany, near the czech border and there were also hills and fields with yellow flowers I don't know the name of.
Using your new plants I wanted to reproduce such a scene, but it seems you're a step ahead of me :)

Looking forward to see more, as this looks very promising!

Cheers,
Martin
Title: Re: yellow field [WIP]
Post by: TheBadger on July 24, 2013, 08:55:29 am
WIP? It already looks like movie quality.
Only problem I have is its too small to use as wallpaper.

Title: Re: yellow field [WIP]
Post by: mhaze on July 24, 2013, 11:06:21 am
Fantastic there's a spot like that not far from me even has the same sort of fence
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Post by: Gannaingh on July 24, 2013, 03:11:45 pm
Beautiful! If it's just the WIP, I can't wait to see your final.
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Post by: efflux on July 24, 2013, 06:41:00 pm
I like the second one. Nice setup. The pink flowers add a cool colour contrast.
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Post by: Jo Kariboo on July 24, 2013, 07:17:41 pm
May be small but the picture looks very promising. Obviously I'd like to see in a larger format !
Title: Re: yellow field [WIP]
Post by: choronr on July 25, 2013, 02:04:25 am
Reminds me of the mid west farmlands in Iowa ...very nice Walli.
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Post by: EoinArmstrong on July 25, 2013, 02:50:24 am
Pretty jaw-dropping thus far!
Title: Re: yellow field [WIP]
Post by: Walli on July 25, 2013, 08:00:36 am
thanks. I am testing some objects at the moment. I think I might move the tree a bit more to the back, as I wanted focus to be on the field. Also modeled a little barn
Title: Re: yellow field [WIP]
Post by: TheBadger on July 25, 2013, 10:06:37 am
Agree Walli.
I like the barn idea. It adds to the overall image.

The tree you just added is real nice. I think you should keep it too. But definitely put it far enough back that it does not obstruct those beautiful rolling hills.
Title: Re: yellow field [WIP]
Post by: Walli on July 25, 2013, 05:44:22 pm
some progress
Title: Re: yellow field [WIP]
Post by: inkydigit on July 25, 2013, 08:05:41 pm
A future Dutch master ... I think of Vincent- This is looking more brilliant every time
Title: Re: yellow field [WIP]
Post by: choronr on July 25, 2013, 08:45:26 pm
Looking forward to the whole image ...looking fine so far.
Title: Re: yellow field [WIP]
Post by: EoinArmstrong on July 26, 2013, 04:08:41 am
Keep going with this :)  I love that the atmo is plain and simple - looks very realistic.  The large tree detracts from the realism somewhat, though - perhaps it's a lack of transparency/edge glow on the leaves?
Title: Re: yellow field [WIP]
Post by: reck on July 26, 2013, 07:49:10 am
Walli as a modeller and someone who uses a lot of objects in the scene I have a question for you. Do you turn the ray traced objects option off so that you're able to use displacement on your objects?

I assume there's a downside to turning off the RTO option otherwise why would you ever use it if you lose displacements, what is the downside?

Thanks
Title: Re: yellow field [WIP]
Post by: ADE on July 26, 2013, 10:16:30 am
Walli Van Gogh?   looking good, I did a similar model a few yrs back, not near as good as this
Title: Re: yellow field [WIP]
Post by: Walli on July 26, 2013, 10:43:53 am
usually I prefer raytraced on. With TG2 I then use (if needed and possible) the highpoly version so that I don´t need displacement anymore.
Title: Re: yellow field [WIP]
Post by: Walli on July 30, 2013, 07:52:22 am
probably final, lets see ;-)

Title: Re: yellow field [FINAL 07-30-2013]
Post by: Hannes on July 30, 2013, 08:24:13 am
This is really beautiful, Walli. I think I can hear the birds singing and I can smell the air. Summer!
Title: Re: yellow field [FINAL 07-30-2013]
Post by: Walli on July 30, 2013, 09:47:33 am
just for fun, because someone mentioned "painter"
Title: Re: yellow field [FINAL 07-30-2013]
Post by: mhaze on July 30, 2013, 09:52:00 am
Wonderful!!!
Title: Re: yellow field [FINAL 07-30-2013]
Post by: Antoine on July 30, 2013, 10:28:16 am
Very realistic scene, peaceful also !
Title: Re: yellow field [FINAL 07-30-2013]
Post by: Dune on July 30, 2013, 11:44:38 am
Very nice, but I can't keep myself from some crits. You know I mean well  ;) It is a field of some crop, no? Then the 'same color hillock' in the distance looks a bit odd. Crit 2 is the wide angle; it seems now as if the farm lady is pushing the fence. I think I would prefer another POV, where you see the fence angling away somehow, and a more 'normal angled lens'.
But it does have a very pleasant atmosphere! 
Title: Re: yellow field [FINAL 07-30-2013]
Post by: choronr on July 30, 2013, 12:23:41 pm
This delivers the peak of summer. Very nice composition.
Title: Re: yellow field [FINAL 07-30-2013]
Post by: TheBadger on July 30, 2013, 02:17:26 pm
I like it a lot. But why no arms?
Title: Re: yellow field [FINAL 07-30-2013]
Post by: Walli on July 30, 2013, 02:39:52 pm
here the arms
Title: Re: yellow field [FINAL 07-30-2013]
Post by: TheBadger on July 30, 2013, 02:43:12 pm
Ahh nice.
Did you make her Walli? I have not made a person or fabric yet. looks like a lot of fun.
Title: Re: yellow field [FINAL 07-30-2013]
Post by: Walli on July 30, 2013, 02:50:00 pm
I used Makehuman to create a "base", as I knew that almost all bodyparts would be hidden underneath piles of cloth. I then modeled the skirt, attached it to the hip and made a clothsim while bringing the woman in pose (Cinema4D). Afterwards I modeled hair, cloth on head, blouse, west and pinafore (also Cinema4D).
Actually now I wished I would have decided to model that first and then bring the figure into pose, but I didn´t want to set up rigging/clothsim for all those parts too.

So I did not model the woman, just the clothing on top.
Title: Re: yellow field [FINAL 07-30-2013]
Post by: Walli on July 31, 2013, 02:46:08 am
@ Ulco: you mean the rapeseed on the small hills in front of the forest in the back? I think you are right, probably would have been better to have a regular meadow over there.
Title: Re: yellow field [FINAL 07-30-2013]
Post by: Dune on July 31, 2013, 02:50:22 am
Yes, that's what I mean, Walli. Or you could place a small group of trees there.
Title: Re: yellow field [FINAL 07-30-2013]
Post by: Walli on July 31, 2013, 02:53:19 am
...yes..probably I will take another shot....
Title: Re: yellow field [FINAL 07-30-2013]
Post by: Dune on July 31, 2013, 02:53:51 am
It's worth the effort! Great scene.
Title: Re: yellow field [FINAL 07-30-2013]
Post by: Walli on August 01, 2013, 02:58:47 am
Final final  ;)


Title: Re: yellow field [final FINAL 08-01-2013]
Post by: Dune on August 01, 2013, 03:00:49 am
Yes! Totally fantastic!
Title: Re: yellow field [final FINAL 08-01-2013]
Post by: EoinArmstrong on August 01, 2013, 03:08:22 am
Magnificent and inspiring.  Just brilliant *swoon*
Title: Re: yellow field [final FINAL 08-01-2013]
Post by: Antoine on August 01, 2013, 03:10:06 am
The new lighting adds even more realism here. This is a great scene. It could be a postcard.
Title: Re: yellow field [final FINAL 08-01-2013]
Post by: yossam on August 01, 2013, 03:29:00 am
It is fantastic................it still has that painterly feel to it (my opinion). I like it............ ;D
Title: Re: yellow field [final FINAL 08-01-2013]
Post by: Kadri on August 01, 2013, 03:59:08 am

The only part that i would try to change would be the fabric .
It looks too much CGI clean but that could be easily changed in post too.

I like this one very much . Great :)
Title: Re: yellow field [final FINAL 08-01-2013]
Post by: masonspappy on August 01, 2013, 04:31:21 am
This is fantastic work Walli! Beautifully done!
Title: Re: yellow field [final FINAL 08-01-2013]
Post by: Saurav on August 01, 2013, 07:20:27 am
Beautiful final render Walli, you nailed the atmosphere and the lighting on this.
Title: Re: yellow field [final FINAL 08-01-2013]
Post by: Walli on August 01, 2013, 10:07:58 am
thanks! @ Kadri - I think you are right. I wanted to have a certain amount of silkiness on the cloth, instead it would have been more plausible to make it rougher.
Title: Re: yellow field [final FINAL 08-01-2013]
Post by: TheBadger on August 01, 2013, 05:27:21 pm
Should be an animation!
Oh how I wish I could animate in TG!; Those birds, some wind, the lady moving about! Can you imagine it?!
Of course I mean full animation, not just *very clever* tricks. :o
Title: Re: yellow field [final FINAL 08-01-2013]
Post by: Gannaingh on August 01, 2013, 06:04:18 pm
Beautiful, Walli! Excellent work!
Title: Re: yellow field [final FINAL 08-01-2013]
Post by: choronr on August 02, 2013, 12:15:05 am
Now it is complete as I was hoping for ...very well created by you Walli.
Title: Re: yellow field [final FINAL 08-01-2013]
Post by: Walli on August 02, 2013, 05:32:10 am
thanks!
It was even picked by the CGTalk staff (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?f=132&t=1118476), I think that did not happen to often with a landscape rendering of mine so far.
Title: Re: yellow field [final FINAL 08-01-2013]
Post by: EoinArmstrong on August 02, 2013, 05:40:08 am
Congrats!  It's a worthy piece
Title: Re: yellow field [final FINAL 08-01-2013]
Post by: j meyer on August 02, 2013, 10:14:13 am
Final Final is fine.
Title: Re: yellow field [final FINAL 08-01-2013]
Post by: Hannes on August 02, 2013, 01:02:35 pm
Beautiful image, Walli! Congratulations!
Title: Re: yellow field [final FINAL 08-01-2013]
Post by: RArcher on August 02, 2013, 02:11:51 pm
Big congratulations Walli, that is a spectacular result. 
Title: Re: yellow field [final FINAL 08-01-2013]
Post by: Icegrip on August 04, 2013, 04:19:50 pm
One of the best renders I've seen here. Outstanding work!