O K Princess, in the back.....

Started by bobbystahr, June 24, 2016, 10:31:05 PM

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bobbystahr

Momma rides shotgun today. While looking through MartinRichard's renders I saw this caddy that I always meant to extrapolate on so with little in my mind but a scene this evolved, I think the stone house is from Ade, the other I believe from 3darchive.The giant elms lining the street are from mr-miley, thanks again, and the background fill trees are XFROG freebie elms. The characters I just posted about and the girl in the car, "Princess" is the same one from my architectural glass test building render. Low ish res but rendered quite fast, 1 1/2 hrs. so may go bigger at least.
something borrowed,
something Blue.
Ring out the Old.
Bring in the New
Bobby Stahr, Paracosmologist

yossam

OK Bobby............cool looking scene. Afraid you have 4 flat tires..........need to raise your Caddy a little bit. You are running on the whitewalls.  :-*

bobbystahr

Quote from: yossam on June 24, 2016, 11:53:06 PM
OK Bobby............cool looking scene. Afraid you have 4 flat tires..........need to raise your Caddy a little bit. You are running on the whitewalls.  :-*
Yeah, I added some displacement just before rendering....ooops.  Gonna add some road garbage veg and FSs to the edging as well.
something borrowed,
something Blue.
Ring out the Old.
Bring in the New
Bobby Stahr, Paracosmologist

Dune

Really nicely put together. But there are some more issues besides the flats. You can do better with the road, I'm sure; not using an image map, but proper fake stone gravel or tarmac. And there's a problem with the tiling of the house's walls. If you could make that texture file tileable, you may get rid of it. You can do that in photoshop, or I think there are online services wher you can upload an image to be tiled. Or just find another one.

bobbystahr

Quote from: Dune on June 25, 2016, 03:03:37 AM
Really nicely put together. But there are some more issues besides the flats. You can do better with the road, I'm sure; not using an image map, but proper fake stone gravel or tarmac. And there's a problem with the tiling of the house's walls. If you could make that texture file tileable, you may get rid of it. You can do that in photoshop, or I think there are online services wher you can upload an image to be tiled. Or just find another one.

Thanks Ulco...yeah the road will get more work and the house is a .tgo so it's harder to adjust stuff like that and as it's I think Ade's  share I hesitate to tweak it...tried blending the road as there are PF's there but they didn't come thru in the mix. Won't get fixed till Monday m\now as I have a beach gig to play this weekend and I'm leaving an hour or so.
something borrowed,
something Blue.
Ring out the Old.
Bring in the New
Bobby Stahr, Paracosmologist


mhaze

Great start with Ulco's refinements could be a great render.

DocCharly65

A very good start! I like the image and its composition very much.

I agree with Ulco's suggestions... but also I agree: the beach gig comes first  :)

bobbystahr

#8
Started fresh on the road after the beach. The only image map left is the edge mask...studied the road outside the resort and this is close...C&C welcome.
something borrowed,
something Blue.
Ring out the Old.
Bring in the New
Bobby Stahr, Paracosmologist

Dune

The road is a bit strange now. Why not just make it black with a tiny (0.5cm) dark grey fake stone in it, and perhaps some reflection (no-RT). And you still have the house wall texture problem.

yossam

The princess kinda looks like Taylor Swift............... ::)

bobbystahr

Quote from: Dune on June 27, 2016, 10:57:31 AM
The road is a bit strange now. Why not just make it black with a tiny (0.5cm) dark grey fake stone in it, and perhaps some reflection (no-RT). And you still have the house wall texture problem.

The road I was studying was a mud road at the beach...didn't touch the house as I found  it has funny uv mapping and Ade no longer has the .obj to fix all that. I may at some point put asphalt(out of character for the beach though)on the road and replace the house. Was going for all TG type objects in the houses but may use one of my hunderds of .obj houses. Rather more involved in music these days so likely not too soon. Will add to this thread if I get it done.
something borrowed,
something Blue.
Ring out the Old.
Bring in the New
Bobby Stahr, Paracosmologist

bobbystahr

Quote from: yossam on June 27, 2016, 11:56:48 AM
The princess kinda looks like Taylor Swift............... ::)

a lotta poser babes seem to and I suspect this is one from the parts list although it came from 3darchive.
something borrowed,
something Blue.
Ring out the Old.
Bring in the New
Bobby Stahr, Paracosmologist

bobbystahr

in a quarter the time TG3.4 took, just sayin;
Thanks for the nagging Ulco, finally found an acceptable non repeating brick texture and I like it much better. Did the best I could on the road. Will take another stab at it later. This scene rendered in 22:40 as opposed to the 4 hours it took on TG3.4
something borrowed,
something Blue.
Ring out the Old.
Bring in the New
Bobby Stahr, Paracosmologist

Dune

Yeah, much better stonework! Pity it takes so long to render. If you do try another one, add some dust to the road!