If you don't mind my pointing it out. The only people who will care whether or not you can see the rings of Saturn from Enceladus are the people at NASA and in similar fields. If it's going to look better, don't you think you should just make them show up?
Also, sometimes distance between your camera and the surface helps. You're trying a specific camera angle and positioning that only works when the shot in the centre looks stunning. That's no insult to your work. Everybody has to start somewhere, and the most amazing space renders started as nothing more than a few balls hung in right positions.
Additionally, stars help. As would the inclusion of that big ball of gas in the centre of our solar system, better known as the sun. Because that is also a source of light in this scene, however dim.