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Started by yossam, October 10, 2011, 11:27:04 PM

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yossam

Trying some different plants for a change. C&C welcome...........

Pentagular Dark

The plants look a little fake mainly because of the lack other trees around them.
Other than that it's a nice render I like the Dino and algae.  ;)
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Dune

I agree with Cat; you need more species of trees and plants, and angle the original object 3 degrees or so. I don't like the sky. Why not start out with a plain sky until you got the scene ok? The dino's head is half hidden, better move it a bit. But it has potential!

Ah, I now see the dino's head isn't hidden, but kind of 'eats' the leaves behind it. Still needs to be moved slightly.

Pentagular Dark

Also upon closer inspection I realized there are no waves on the water, at all. Anywhere. Doesn't seem realistic either.
BTW call me Parker.
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:)

Is good as it is, looks very good. leave it as is, not make changes.

Dune

OK, Parker. You're right, a few ripples would do well. Try the wind patch option on some small scales.

yossam

Made some changes......

Henry Blewer

The sun may be too low to the horizon. I think you may get more variation with your lighting if the sun angle was higher.
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Dune

Henry is right. It's probably also due to high atmo density (?).  And perhaps move your POV so that the line of 'coast' isn't so straight. Or warp the coast a little more.