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Started by biker2910, February 20, 2012, 09:17:19 AM
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biker2910
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Waterview
February 20, 2012, 09:17:19 AM
my first render after 3 months break
stones and water are fascinating for me .. cc welcome
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February 20, 2012, 02:04:35 PM
i added some plants into the Background
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February 21, 2012, 03:30:44 AM
Terrific scene! I really like the archaic look of it. We will need to see a larger version of the second one, of course.
There is one crit I have; the circular wave patterns are too similar and too outspoken for such calm water. There is a way to do this procedurally instead of with a mask, where you could take a few close by points where the stones are and feed this into some blue nodes producing outward ripples. It's on the forum somewhere. And it's a pity of the flattened left stone. If you try another seed this might be changed, but it would change the composition as well.
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February 21, 2012, 03:45:10 AM
Wow! wonderful scene. Where did you get those underwater plants?
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February 23, 2012, 05:34:33 AM
here the values I used in this landscape:
AA 8; Detail 1,GI relative Detail 3, Gi sam. Quality 3, blur radius 8,
plant's under water plants from Xfrog; Background Plant's from Walli (ornamental Gras)
Thanks for your comments.
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February 23, 2012, 06:30:51 AM
excellent scene!
my only really minor think I might change, would be by adding some reflectivity to the plants sticking out of the water, so the look wet/succulent?
but that is being picky!
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February 23, 2012, 01:25:41 PM
I like a lot of the elements in this image. But only one thing is bothering me. I think you should fill in the empty space on the upper right of the distant range. The negative space there does not fit the comp of the shot angle.
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February 24, 2012, 10:31:27 AM
I love this image but, for some reason, I like the first one with no plants best, it's like a painting and the trees in the follow-ups kind of take that illustrative feeling away.
I think I'd completely remove that background terrain, though, it looks too much like it's just been dropped in there as a filler and the steep walls don't look natural at all, compared to the rest of the image, I think it'd look much better without it.
The water is superb!
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