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Started by yossam, January 02, 2013, 01:21:10 AM

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yossam

C&C please.........

Dune

You're very productive. I like the subtle bird, but I would make it twice it's size, so it doesn't appear as a dust particle at first glance (that's what I thought). And I also like the drama in the landscape, terrific terrain! I think you could enhance that drama more by more dramatic lighting, darker clouds, illuminating certain parts, darkening others.

yossam

Changed the clouds and lighting.

Dune

I took the liberty to adjust it a little more. Dark clouds in the distance (where the blue is) would even dramatize it more, I guess.

yossam

One more time...........

Zairyn Arsyn

those clouds in the last render look kinda ominous, bad storm.

nice displacements
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Dune

Nice and ominous indeed, changed gamma again.