Zlain's old dirt road Final

Started by Zairyn Arsyn, March 28, 2013, 06:31:52 pm

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Dune

I think this looks really nice. You might consider a little more glare still, but it's a huge improvement already. Road is also great now.

mhaze


Zairyn Arsyn

i decided to add a pop of bushes, from Mr. Lampposts bush pack

changed the clouds some - in the last one they were overlapping the sun, though it didnt make much of a difference, i changed it anyways, theirs a bit of a difference.



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masonspappy

Nice - I like the soft, almost gentle lighting

Zairyn Arsyn

i should have another large good quality render by sometime tomorrow,
Z signing off.
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Zairyn Arsyn

a larger version :)
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Mor

I like the mood the gentle and soft light gives to this image.

Zairyn Arsyn

i'm thinking about changing the flower objects, to the dogwrose bush w/ flowers (i got some feedback elsewhere)
what do you guys think?

i'll do a render and post it.
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Zairyn Arsyn

different flowers...
nwda dogrose tgos

C&C, suggestions, welcome.
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yossam

I think the flower blossoms are too close to the same color as your dry grass. Maybe turn the diffuse color up some. I like these flowers better than the previous ones. They just need to stand out more.

Dune

Nice flowers, but I agree with Yossam. If they would be deeper/lighter blue it would give a great contrast to the warm glow of the rest. I think you need to reduce the pinpricks of shine (either size or brightness) on the ground pebbles. It all looks kind of dry and they attract just a little too much attention.

inkydigit

the light and mood here is perfect, the detailing too, a great image so far!
:)

Zairyn Arsyn

currently the flowers are now a deeper color of red, from what they were before, but i could change the diffuse texture next time i render.
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new flower color, will post another version with a different color soon
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blue flowers

C&C welcome
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