Stranded...

Started by Zairyn Arsyn, June 07, 2013, 02:17:58 PM

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Zairyn Arsyn

an exoplanet with a very thin atmosphere

"Ridges" Terrain by Freelancah
stones & pebbles from FrankB/nwda

36mins render time
detail .7 AA 7

C&C welcome
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Volker Harun

The thin atmosphere creates a weird mood, as the depth is not really present. So the background areas look almost like plastic, as there is no transition from minor displacements and stones in the foreground to the back.
If you would add some large variations in the luminosity of the rock surface, you'd get that amount of depth back.
Else I would drift the camera a bit to the top left to create a more tense point of view.

Keep on going.

Mahnmut

Great impression of a forlorn place somewhere far out!
Cheers,
J

Zairyn Arsyn

Quote from: Mahnmut on June 12, 2013, 04:17:20 PM
Great impression of a forlorn place somewhere far out!
Cheers,
J
yep.
thats pretty much the emotion i was going for with this
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