1st Render 2nd attempt

[mr-miley]

Oh dear, I can see all my spare time being no longer "Spare"!

Damn, I knew I shouldn't have downloaded the TG3 Preview *Shakes fist at Planetside*

Anyway, here is a second version. I have done a lot more to the walls, and added a "dust storm" (which means you can't see most of the work I've done to the walls  ) Still work to do on the foreground, and the water needs something too, don't know what though. Maybe a big rock sticking up out of it?

Comments welcomed

Miles

[Dune]

You've committed yourself now  So, why not place (or try to get) one or a few of those nice squarish rocks on the foreground (or something else). Foreground lacks some point of interest, is my humble opinion. The rest is nice, I like the dust/mist.

[mr-miley]

Definitely needs something in the foreground. I think some rocks would be a good thing.  I"ve also got to do something about the texturing on the mound on the left,  in the foreground too.  I should probably tone down the strength of the sunlight as I think it's just a bit too much.