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Started by yossam, September 25, 2013, 09:04:18 PM
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yossam
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Lone
September 25, 2013, 09:04:18 PM
This needs something in the left background...................any suggestions?
Jo Kariboo
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September 25, 2013, 09:55:42 PM
Nice one yossam ! I like the vegetation. The animal it probably to big. Maybee change the POV to provocate more desolation place.
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what's the difference?
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September 25, 2013, 10:02:12 PM
Like all the elements. Scale seems strange to me though.
It has been eaten.
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September 26, 2013, 03:29:12 PM
Changed the POV.................
choronr
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September 26, 2013, 04:14:53 PM
That is looking much better. Play with the light some more, maybe reposition to upper right and lower? Increase red sky decay and lower gamma from 2.2 to 1.9.
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September 26, 2013, 07:54:05 PM
How's this......................?
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September 26, 2013, 08:23:56 PM
That's the icing on the cake ...looking very good.
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September 26, 2013, 08:47:36 PM
I love the last version, very good colors and angle. The original was good too. I might have added a moon to that one, just to give the sky a little something extra.
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September 26, 2013, 09:11:05 PM
The changes really made this pop.
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Procrastinate later.
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September 27, 2013, 12:20:44 AM
The second POV is perfect. Though of course the quality of the models is important from this position and the twigs do look angular, unfortunately. I am not sure if the sky is a bit dark. I'd like to see just a bit of reflection on the vegetation perhaps as well.
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