Lone

Started by yossam, September 25, 2013, 09:04:18 PM

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yossam

This needs something in the left background...................any suggestions?

Jo Kariboo

Nice one yossam ! I like the vegetation. The animal it probably to big. Maybee change the POV to provocate more desolation place.

TheBadger

Like all the elements. Scale seems strange to me though.
It has been eaten.

yossam

Changed the POV.................

choronr

That is looking much better. Play with the light some more, maybe reposition to upper right and lower? Increase red sky decay and lower gamma from 2.2 to 1.9.

yossam

How's this......................?

choronr

That's the icing on the cake ...looking very good.

ares2101

I love the last version, very good colors and angle.  The original was good too.  I might have added a moon to that one, just to give the sky a little something extra.

Lady of the Lake

The changes really made this pop.

otakar

The second POV is perfect. Though of course the quality of the models is important from this position and the twigs do look angular, unfortunately. I am not sure if the sky is a bit dark. I'd like to see just a bit of reflection on the vegetation perhaps as well.