Lake

Started by archonforest, February 21, 2014, 10:52:36 AM

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archonforest

A very simple picture but I like it :)
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Hannes

This looks really beautiful. The water is very good, the trees look great, but I'd suggest working at the clouds. They don't look real. The rest absolutely does, so if you'd improve the clouds, it would be a simple, but stunning image.

archonforest

Thx. Do you have any input on the clouds? They are flat?
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dorianvan

If it were me, I would also play with the sun elevation and strength. I like the composition but agree about the clouds; try changing the density (less) and seed, also might add a lower 3d cloud. Nice start.
-Dorian

TheBadger

It has been eaten.

Hannes

Yes, I think the clouds are too flat. It's hard to say, what would be the best here. You could google for some similar images (photographs) and try to replicate the clouds that you're seeing. Just a suggestion...