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Started by yossam, May 30, 2014, 01:21:32 PM

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yossam

Too bright?

archonforest

Dell T5500 with Dual Hexa Xeon CPU 3Ghz, 32Gb ram, GTX 1080
Amiga 1200 8Mb ram, 8Gb ssd

fleetwood

I don't think it's too bright but the paint or crack patterns on the sunny parts of the fence are lost on my monitor. Maybe some balancing could bring out those details.

masonspappy

Good image. Agree with Fleetwood

bobbystahr

I like it as well but I'd add or increase the bump map's presence, maybe add a tree(off camera) tween the Sun/Light and the fence to cast a little bit of shadow and make that soft shadows.
something borrowed,
something Blue.
Ring out the Old.
Bring in the New
Bobby Stahr, Paracosmologist

yossam

Changed some things.................... :)

j meyer

In the first iteration you had a nice wood grain,like a fresh fence waiting
for the final varnish,which was subtle and nice.
Now you have a totally exaggerated bump texture shouting bad CG work. ;)
From my point of view the first look was much better.

yossam

That's what I was afraid of..............trying to get the grain to show up on the gate and trellis. Back to the drawing board.  :-[

bobbystahr

yeah bump is touchy and I and I generally need to weak a bit before it looks 'real'. I like the lighting change though...with that lighting you'd need little if any bump. I thought the first one was way too bright but that could be either my colour blindness or a problem with specularity.
something borrowed,
something Blue.
Ring out the Old.
Bring in the New
Bobby Stahr, Paracosmologist

yossam

Reduced the bump, turned spec to 0, played with the lighting a little more. ?

bobbystahr

Quote from: yossam on May 31, 2014, 04:40:00 PM
Reduced the bump, turned spec to 0, played with the lighting a little more. ?

That's better but I think maybe you need a finer grain/higher resolution bump map as the bumps just seem too wide over all...losing the specularity worked, took the 'glare' off that I saw on my monitor.
something borrowed,
something Blue.
Ring out the Old.
Bring in the New
Bobby Stahr, Paracosmologist

yossam

I'm thru with this.................. :)

bobbystahr

Quote from: yossam on June 01, 2014, 01:31:45 AM
I'm thru with this.................. :)
That, for me, Nails it. nice grain detail and you can see the brightness of the day from the sides of the pickets and the side of the arbor...well done
something borrowed,
something Blue.
Ring out the Old.
Bring in the New
Bobby Stahr, Paracosmologist