something nice (i think)

Started by archonforest, December 17, 2014, 11:48:55 AM

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archonforest

Would like to share my last render. (fake stones, dof and some post work)
C&C are welcome.
Have a nice day :)
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choronr

This is very nice; great job! One thing I'd like to see is increasing the vertical dimension (without moving the camera) such that you will gain more sky above the sun; thus giving the image format a better balance.

Kadri


Looks interesting.
Not sure about the lower part. I wasn't immediately aware that it was water.

archonforest

Quote from: choronr on December 17, 2014, 12:41:39 PM
This is very nice; great job! One thing I'd like to see is increasing the vertical dimension (without moving the camera) such that you will gain more sky above the sun; thus giving the image format a better balance.

Thank you. I will do another version with more sky, perhaps with some clouds :)
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archonforest

Quote from: Kadri on December 17, 2014, 12:50:33 PM

Looks interesting.
Not sure about the lower part. I wasn't immediately aware that it was water.
Yeah the blur killed the water for sure but I thought it is visible coz of the sparks on the water... :)
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zaxxon

Nice image! The lower part, with a little tweaking would enhance an already nice render. But really fine as is.

archonforest

Quote from: zaxxon on December 17, 2014, 01:39:03 PM
Nice image! The lower part, with a little tweaking would enhance an already nice render. But really fine as is.
Thx :)
What enhance u would do?
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TheBadger

It has been eaten.

mhaze

Definitely a keeper, great pov, nice colour, excellent rocks and  perfectly placed plants - a little snow and you have an Iceland entry!

archonforest

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archonforest

Quote from: mhaze on December 18, 2014, 05:15:26 AM
Definitely a keeper, great pov, nice colour, excellent rocks and  perfectly placed plants - a little snow and you have an Iceland entry!
Thank you!
LOL on the Iceland part! :D
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archonforest

Another version with some clouds.  :)
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TheBadger

#12
Well I don't like the clouds at all. I like the cold sun in the first one.
Rather I would work on the edge of the water against the stones which feels not quite perfect to me. And also, the unnatural sharp line/edge of on the stones them selves (which as I understand it is not your fault, but a problem with fake stones) But I think some people posted fixes for that?

I also agree that this image would be good for the Iceland contest! Except add lots of good moss to the rocks .And then PRESTO! SUMMER!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-SUvnM3nqfU  ;D

Just my feeling at this moment.
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archonforest

Quote from: TheBadger on December 18, 2014, 02:20:32 PM
Well I don't like the clouds at all. I like the cold sun in the first one.
Rather I would work on the edge of the water against the stones which feels not quite perfect to me. And also, the unnatural sharp line/edge of on the stones them selves (which as I understand it is not your fault, but a problem with fake stones) But I think some people posted fixes for that?

I also agree that this image would be good for the Iceland contest! Except add lots of good moss to the rocks .And then PRETO! SUMMER!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-SUvnM3nqfU  ;D

Just my feeling at this moment.

Thx. I was thinking about moss before but as far as I know we can populate only objects no? But these are fake stones.
Also if anybody knows how to fix the fake stone edges pls let me know :)
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choronr

Maybe replace the sharp edged stones with displaced Cubes. Have a search of the one done by M. Haze. And, he did share it (I think, but I might be wrong) in File sharing. Search it out and give it a try.