Try more dark stuff ...

Started by Michelh, July 05, 2015, 10:57:21 PM

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Michelh

I decided to play with some new trees that I got from xfrog. And also with a more darker sky... as always comments are welcome.

bobbystahr

Nice start...to me the water has not enough clear area...maybe adjust the Wind patch size in the water shader. Nice atmo.
something borrowed,
something Blue.
Ring out the Old.
Bring in the New
Bobby Stahr, Paracosmologist

Michelh

Thank you for your comment. Yes I am doing a new render atm and hopping the water will be better I also added a sea creature. .will see how that comes out.

Dune

I think the scene layout or composition is a bit too simple. There's no depth. I'd move the camera around and try to find a more exciting view. And reduce waves for a pond like this.

TheBadger

I rather like it. Just details and render quality are too low now.

Feel like Im on a boat, fishing in the evening.
It has been eaten.